13 Mink Street

Finished flowering.

First of all, I would like to thank the readers who accompanied me along the way. I have long been familiar with and remembered many readers because they often post this chapter to talk about interaction, and I can meet them almost every day.

Then, for readers who were dissatisfied with the handling of the plot of this book, I accepted it humbly and stood at attention and was beaten.

This book was really exhausting.

Especially in recent months, my physical condition has fallen to the lowest point in my past life.

First it was facial paralysis, then Chuyang, and then various other problems also broke out together.

The facial paralysis has not recovered yet, and one of my eyes cannot be fully closed normally, causing my eyes to cry and be tired all the time, but I need to face the computer screen for typing, and I use my eyes excessively every day, which is even more tormenting.

This directly led to the fact that at the end of this book, I was forced to finish the book with a kind of work inertia, and my creative state and thinking activity dropped sharply.

Many readers have suggested to me that I should just take a break and keep my body healthy before continuing to write.

However, there are so many online articles on the starting point, and everyone is an old bookworm. How many books have you seen that have been broken and updated, and can still maintain the original level after being updated?

For the vast majority, once the update starts, once the state is interrupted, it is difficult to pick it up again.

I have also tried to continue the work that was interrupted for some reason before, but after several attempts, I couldn't get back the feeling of writing this book, so I didn't dare to interrupt the rest.

Another reason is that I made a temporary change in the processing of the ending volume.

I originally designed it as the ending of tragic heroism. This is actually easy to write, the writing difficulty is low, and the story can be more enjoyable.

After I changed it, it highlighted the role of the God of Order, the previous generations of adults, and the first knight order in the past. This undoubtedly made the protagonist team's state at the end awkward and the plot handling was more troublesome.

If I'm in a good state, I can probably rely on my own writing skills and daily inspiration to forcibly bring it back, but it happens to be at the lowest stage of my state.

But I don't regret making such a change, because this book has been written for two years, and many of my ideas and cognitions will inevitably change accordingly.

I can't accept the soy sauce between the God of Order and the Cult of Order at the end, I can't accept that the God of Order is just blocking in vain for the sake of blocking, and the Cult of Order is just guarding for the sake of protection...

If it is reflected in reality, all take-offs are inseparable from the foundation laid by the silent efforts of the predecessors.

I didn’t write it well, it’s not a big plot problem, nor is it a problem with my attitude... After deducting the influence of physical factors, the essence is still a problem of my lack of writing skills.

When I was in middle school, I read Dong Ge’s books and complained to my classmates. When the strong fight in the later stage, they would always use "landslides, ground cracks, water backflow" repeatedly;

Now when it's my turn to write, I find that I can't even write "landslides, ground cracks and water flows back"...

In the past, I thought that I didn't like to write fighting dramas. I preferred to write literary dramas, characters, communication and interaction between people, and the kind of decent writing;

Well, I admit, it turns out that I can't write.

But please rest assured, I will take the time to study and improve.

Another harvest is that I finally understand how to write an outline, not the traditional plot outline, but the atmosphere outline.

Veteran readers know that I write books without an outline. Most of the time, like the readers I follow every day, I don’t know what will happen in the plot tomorrow.

I think it's very interesting, everyone has fun reading it, and there are no spoilers at all.

For example, before it was put on the shelf, the editor asked me to submit an outline, and I said no; in the end, I had no choice but to write one and hand it in: It probably means that grandpa was killed by the people of the God of Order, and Uncle Mason wanted to protect the protagonist. , Instead of becoming an "evil god" and being killed, Karen then began to purify with the help of Pu'er and embarked on the road of revenge.

I remember that starting point gave a recommendation, and the recommended slogan was: "Grandpa was killed, the protagonist embarked on the road of revenge to the church"

For example, Neo, at the beginning he only appeared as a "clerk". I didn't expect the role of Neo at all at the time, and then inexplicably, the fun man appeared.

Furthermore, the attitude towards the God of Order, the idea at the beginning was a very old-fashioned "nurture and take away", and then there must be a battle between Karen and the God of Order;

But as I wrote it, I felt a change. This change was the change of Karen's attitude towards the God of Order, from opposing him to understanding him and then becoming him.

In summary, I think this kind of open-ended writing can bring a lot of fun and excitement.

As for Cavin's question, when I was in good shape, I sat in front of the computer and touched fish for a while, and the idea came, and I didn't think it was too difficult.

But when the line of creation is stretched, I can't stretch it anymore;

In addition, without an outline, it will inevitably lead to the connection and over-explanation between some major plots, which will appear blunt and abrupt, with a sense of tearing.

Fortunately, I have found a way to solve and improve this aspect. In the next book, I will make an outline of the atmosphere. While ensuring the openness of creation, I will control the sense of atmosphere and direction.

As for which category the next book will be, it’s unclear at the moment. I’ve thought about writing a Western fantasy or a traditional martial arts book, and I’ve also thought about writing infinite flow, fantasy or suspense in the next book... Hey, I suddenly found out that I’m a "sea of ​​heroes" "It's pretty deep.

I think, UU Reading www.uukanshu.com still has to wait until I am ready to start the creation of the next book, and decide according to the thoughts and impulses at that time.

Next, there will be a relatively long period of rest and charging time.

First of all, the body must be well adjusted. In the eight years of creation, I have basically not taken any vacations, which leads to physical exhaustion. The same mistake should not be repeated. Without a healthy body, the book cannot write good results.

Then there is learning, not only to strengthen the shortcomings of my writing ability in a targeted manner, but also to continue to charge. When writing this book, when it comes to plots with a little serious argument, I often find that my thinking is weak and my cognition is shallow.

I think, after I have a good rest and study, I should make greater progress in the next book.

at last,

Here I sincerely wish everyone good health and family harmony.

we,

See you next book!

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