The book "Family Cultivation of Immortals: My Perception Can Be Stored" is finally over!

Let me talk about the shortcomings first.

1. The update is slow!

Except for the one month when the book was on the shelves, it basically kept updating at a rate of 4,000 words a day, so that it took 13 months to write a book with less than 1.8 million words.

In-depth review! Bow to the readers!

2. The rhythm in the later stage is not in place!

You can also see in this book that in the later period, Chen Daoxuan's personal force soared so fast that I couldn't hold it back at all.

The reason is that the protagonist's gold finger is too powerful. If the upgrade is too slow, the protagonist will appear to be a waste. If the upgrade is too fast, he will become the family nanny.

I think everyone doesn't want to read the nanny article, so they simply cut off the chapter on Liangjieyuan and ended it directly.

Let's talk about something to be proud of.

This book is the author's first completed book. Although it is suspected of being unfinished, I have basically finished telling a story. Besides, I used to be a eunuch, okay!

It's still an old eunuch who has been eunuchs for three consecutive books. If an old eunuch can finish the book, it's like Eunuch Bai has grown a chick. There is still progress, right?

at last.

end! Sprinkle flowers!

Oh, by the way, the new book will be released around mid-October!

Love you old white.

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