From Mystery Inheretance To Do Anime

Chapter 86

Here, Xiao Yi looked at Ying Lili who was begging hard.

And the other side.

Inside the Yunyun office. The atmosphere is very solemn.

Xia Yizi looked a little angry at Yun Yun who was talking about her work.

This book is her new work,

Naturally, it is also a book that she is proud of with her painstaking efforts.

originally. What she said was to ask Yun Yun to check, and she was also polite.

However, I did not expect that Yun Yun would naturally take this position directly. Then, as a person who came over, she began to point to her works.

This kind of thing. How to make her suffer 22

Of course, Yun Yun can also see it. This girl was already on the verge of breaking out. But she still didn’t want to be afraid, but pointed to a plot with a smile on her face. Whispered:

“Here, it’s wrong. In your setting, the protagonist has a super high IQ, how could he make such a common-sense mistake? Isn’t this a sudden drop in intelligence?_”

“And here. There was another mistake-since you set this female partner as an 8-faced person. Why did you forget her after this important setting 2?”

“Here, although you are in love

A novel, but it’s too bloody to appear as a male partner.”

Every sentence Yun Yun said, like a sharp knife, pierced Xia Shizi’s heart-

Finally, Xia Shizi couldn’t help it.

She has been in the novel industry for several years. No.: This time someone criticized her novel so badly.

The entire air is also like a gunpowder barrel, extremely dry, with only a little spark. Just fried,

Yun Yun didn’t seem to notice the weird atmosphere, 2 still said unhurriedly;

“Of course, these are small problems!

“Small problem? 9” Xia Shizi sips

The lips are a bit weird.

It’s so miserable. Or is it a small problem??

See here. Yun Yun smiled slightly, and then made up the knife again.

“The problem with your wife, L is that there is no attraction in the front, and the sense of expectation is not enough. Although the plot behind is good, it is your fault at the beginning. There is no desire for people to read on,”

In this case, Yun Yun is not false.

Nowadays, because of the underdevelopment of online literature, the current novels are still similar to those of the previous “Jin Yong” teacher.

The early stage is not tepid, has been laying the groundwork

Slowly unfold in the mid-term, only to be interesting in the later period

For example, “Shooting the Eagle”. , The plot of the early desert. Lack of refreshing points, except for killing two birds with one stone. The Golden Swordsman, the others are a bit boring.

Arriving in the Central Plains, it is the ups and downs that are fascinating when the scene unfolds slowly.

So now the novel. Without paying attention to the previous plot, L is very boring.

Of course, this also has something to do with society.

Now. They are all physical books…. I bought a set, so the front is irrelevant, after all, I bought it back. I bought it all. As long as the front is not too boring, it will naturally

See the back.

And everyone will only remember the climax of your plot. The tide is flat and open to buy 6, who cares if you don’t mention it? 2

This point is also something that Yun Yun only understood after Jiang Han’s ‘calling’.

Of course, this knowledge. For Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, it is naturally brand new knowledge(Read more @ wuxiax.com)

Hearing these theories, she naturally did not

Hurriedly defended the road

“If there is no foreshadowing in the early stage, how can we hold up the story behind?” [3

Heard this e

Yun Yun Weiwei-Laughing

. Did not explain too much. Just handed her the information from the drawer and motioned her to open it.

Xia Zhijin Shiyu took the information. If you look away, it turned out to be a script.

Apparently, it is still a fantasy anime script.

“Look!” Yun Yun nodded.

Seeing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu would naturally not be polite. Then I started to read with a hint of eagerness.

The script is not long.

More than ten minutes later. She finished

After reading, she suddenly raised a little confidence again.

Because, in terms of saving her

,, Although this script is good _ but she still found a lot of shortcomings. Slightly worse than her work.

She even thought about it. If this level is the difference between the person in front of her, then she must win this time.

“Evaluate.” Yun Yun didn’t say much.

See here. Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu pursed her lips, her poisonous tongue is about to break out. It’s just to reach the passing line. At first glance, it looks interesting. But when you look closely, you will know. Many dramas are made up improvised, as if the two pots are too mixed. It can be easily seen that it has appeared many times in the famous plot. _A bunch of replicas while

Already 1!_!

Xiazhi. Jin Shiyu did not stop. There was a lot of crackling. The poison tongue is full of attributes.

After speaking, she felt more comfortable. The depression of being poisoned just now was also swept away by the second.

After speaking, the corners of her mouth curled up, and then she took on a triumphant look. Look towards Yun Yun.

but.

Contrary to imagination, Yun Yun, who turned into anger from shame, did not appear, but the one who fell for it was a smile on her face. . Yun Yun that doesn’t seem to know what anger is.

“I said that to her, she is not even angry??” Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was a little surprised

be surprised.

See here.

Yun Yun didn’t hide it anymore, but explained with a smile on her face:

“~ Your words are the same as those of him half a month ago. It’s already a compliment. I naturally won’t be angry.”

Finished. She did not give too much explanation but handed him the notebook she carried with her.

Then said again.

“This time. Look again!”

Seeing this, Lei Zhijin Shiyu frowned

However, she also wanted to know what Yun Yun wanted to do, so she took the notebook in her hand.

The notebook is very thick. It still has the residual warmth of Yunyun.

Just flip it around and she found out

It’s still a bit old, because it seems to be read often. Because of the addition of-layer of transparent. Coat. So although the notebook is a bit old. But it is very well protected.

Open the first page.

Juanxiu’s font has been printed into Xia Zhiqiu’s eyes.

At first glance, the interface is very neat. There is no trace of alteration at all.

Just a few glances. She could see it. This is a novel.

Moreover, looking at the posture.,

It doesn’t seem to be a bean yet.

Seeing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu glanced at Yun Yun in surprise.

In this society, there are only a handful of people who write novels with pens because of the convenience of computers.

certainly.

Naturally, she will not forget the purpose of this trip.

Get in your mood.. With a hint of curiosity, I start to read the first sentence.

“Strength of fighting, three steps,”

Looking at the five big characters on the test magic stone monument that were so shiny and even a little dazzling, the boy was expressionless. The corners of his lips had: z Wiping self-deprecating. Clutching hairy palms, because

Vigorously, causing the slightly sharp nails to pierce deeply into the palm, causing bursts of pain in the heart

“Jiang Han, three stages of fighting power! Level: low level!” beside the test magic stone monument. A middle-aged man glanced at the information displayed on the tablet and announced it indifferently:

Just two or three sentences.

Xia Zhijin and Shiyu have already indulged in

She now has no thoughts in her mind. There is only one question page in my head,

“What’s next? 2″_

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