After all, it's not a computer codeword.

"It seems that I can only write a narrative!"

The so-called narrative is to tell the whole story before and after completely.

This kind of essay doesn't need to be written in such detail.

Just write a rough picture of the story so that the reader knows what kind of story is happening.

But writing this way inevitably lacks some sense of substitution.

There are also some climaxes that don't show off perfectly.

But it doesn't matter.

Su Ming only needs to change his writing technique in the climax part and write the climax part in detail.

At the moment of the knife audience, he will definitely not save.

It's also the most time-saving way to write.

As for readers who want to read the full version, then buy the novel.

Thinking of this, he quickly wrote a paragraph.

[Because this story is too long, I won't write it in too much detail!!]

Meanwhile.

The audience also saw this sentence he wrote.

Although Ou Fu has only introduced the No. 8 contestant now, in fact, Su Ming's room has been playing in the small window at the top.

"That Mr. Blank has finally started to write, what kind of story is he going to write?"

"Crimson Pupil is such a strange name that you don't see the theme of the story at all. "

"Mr. Blank's two books are really good, and I am looking forward to his next creation. "

"Wait, is Mr. Blank going to write a novel? No wonder he wrote this sentence, saying that the story is too long to be too detailed. "

"I understand that, but if it's too rough, will it affect the viewing?"

"There's no way around it, after all, the game is too short, let alone writing a long story. "

"Haha, what does it matter, I think Mr. Su Ming must be able to write beautifully. "

"That's right, I have never questioned Mr. Su Ming's creation, and isn't it just right to write a long story, and now I have a new novel to read. "

"I agree, it looks better to be small!"

The opinions of the audience were not unanimous.

Some people worry that the story is too long and the writing is sketchy.

But there are also viewers who are not worried about this issue.

Most of these audiences know Su Ming's creative strength, so naturally they will not have any doubts about him.

"Is it actually a long story!" Yae Miko clasped her hands on her chest with interest, "Look at that opening, it seems to be a story about the overthrow of the rule of the corrupt emperor 08 countries, there are very few novels of this type, and it is not easy to write them." "

"Overthrowing a corrupt empire, this theme is kind of interesting. "

Aratani's eyes lit up.

This kind of subject matter is indeed rare.

But it's fascinating.

She was already looking forward to the story.

"It's the story of the overthrow of a corrupt empire, and I thought it was a mythical story like "Game Life Zero"!"

Hu Tao was slightly disappointed.

There's no way, it's really the story of "Game Life Zero" that shocked her too much.

She couldn't imagine what kind of story could be surpassed.

"I think it's funny, like something like this has happened in some countries in history!"

Xingqiu has read a lot of historical biographies.

I also know a little bit about the history of each country.

Naturally, we also know that similar things have happened in history.

Besides, the story of overthrowing a corrupt empire and then ascending to the throne is interesting, isn't it?

"Overthrow the corrupt empire?!"

Jean listened to the sound of discussion in her ears and thought for a while.

Immediately, her eyes lit up, and she thought of the story of Vanessa thousands of years ago.

It is also the story of rebellion against tyranny, overthrowing the old system and establishing a new one.

Thinking of this, Jean became more and more interested in the story that this honorary knight was going to create.

"Captain Qin, what is a corrupt empire?"

Today was Klee's happiest day, because Captain Jean actually let her out, and she participated in such an interesting event.

It's just that she doesn't understand the corrupt empire that everyone is talking about.

"It's the Great Demon King, Klee!"

Lisa on the side took the initiative to explain.

"Oh, that's right, so it's the story of defeating the Great Demon King!"

Klee was a little happy when she heard this.

"Yes, Klee!"

Jean couldn't help but answer with a smile.

"Great, great!"

Klee cheered.

That cute appearance made the audience who saw this scene laugh.

Klee, this kid is so cute!

The other side.

"What Su Ming wants to write is really the story of overthrowing the corrupt empire!"

Navia wasn't too surprised, after all, Su Ming had already revealed something to her before.

Charlotte on the side was a little curious.

"Overthrow the corrupt empire? Isn't that going to overthrow the gods?"

"Huh?"

Navia was a little shocked when she heard this, but after thinking about it, she felt that this was indeed the case.

After all, the Seven Kingdoms are now all ruled by gods.

Doesn't the overthrow of a corrupt empire mean the overthrow of the gods?

"Look, Su Ming is starting to write!"

Before Navia could figure it out, Charlotte's voice pulled her back from her thoughts.

Although there are still some doubts, these doubts are left in the story to answer.

Room 30.

Su Ming took a deep breath and then began to write.

[The story begins with a boy named Tazmi.]

In order to get ahead, in order to save poor villages.

Tazmi and his two best friends prepare to travel to the rich and prosperous imperial capital.

The three of them each have great ambitions, and they are bound to make a career in the imperial capital.

Before leaving, the village chief gave Tazmi a statue of a god, bless him with a triumphant song in the imperial capital.

However, on the night of leaving the village, the three were separated by thieves.

Tazmi had no choice but to go to the imperial capital alone.

Along the way, Tazmi stumbles upon a soil dragon attacking two passing travelers.

Seeing this, he naturally would not sit idly by, and killed the earth dragon with just a few knives.

After the rescued travelers learned that he wanted to break through the imperial capital, their expressions were a little strange.

"Young man, do you really want to break through the imperial capital?"

"Of course, in the imperial capital, there is a piece of heaven, but the romance of the countrymen!"

Tazmi replied handsomely.

It's just that he was still a little puzzled when he saw the strange eyes of the two passengers.

"Boy, the imperial capital...... It's not the kind of paradise you imagined......"

"It's lively, but it's inhabited by monsters that are more ferocious than this earth dragon....."

Words in the face of two travelers.

Tazmi was shocked, "What, is it possible that there are dangerous species everywhere on the streets?"

"No, it's human!"

"Dressed in human skin, he's no different from a monster at heart, a guy like that... It's all over the place..."

After leaving these words, the two travelers left in a hurry.

Tazmi was still a little confused.

But in order to make money and get ahead in the imperial capital, he still chose to go to the imperial capital.

All the way.

Tazmi finally arrived in the long-awaited imperial capital.

It was a magnificent and lively place, which made him look forward to it at once.

Immediately after that, Tazmi went to the place where he signed up to join the army.

wants to get ahead by joining the army, so that his martial arts can be regarded as useful.

But in the end, because he was dissatisfied with becoming a first-class soldier, he wanted to show his strength but was thrown out.

Now that the army is saturated, it is not easy to join the army, let alone be a captain of a soldier in the first place.

"You seem to be bothered, boy, do you want my sister to help you?"

Just when Tazmi was wondering how to get ahead.

A beautiful sister from the Great European Pai came to him.

"Is this the imperial capital...!!"

Tazmi was speechless in shock by the majestic mountain of her big sister.

Later, the eldest sister said that she had a way to make him the captain of the soldier directly, and she only needed to invite her to dinner.

Where will Tazmi let go of this opportunity. (If you read a violent novel, go to Feilu Novel Network!)

immediately took the big sister to the tavern for dinner.

After some inquiry, Tazmi learned that the eldest sister had connections.

With a little touch, he can become the captain of the soldiers.

Tazmi is convinced of this.

So he directly took out all his belongings. []

The eldest sister took the money and told Tazmi to wait here, and told him that he would soon become the captain of the soldier of his dreams.

However, the silly Tazmi waited from day to night.

Until the hotel closed, the big sister did not come back.

If it weren't for the hotel waiter's kind reminder that he had been deceived, his single brain would not have reacted until now.

In this way, Tazmi, who was penniless, had to sleep on the streets. 】

"Hey, what's going on with Mr. Su Ming, why is the beginning of this story a little bland!"

"That's right, at the beginning, it tells the story of three young girls who went to the prosperous imperial capital in order to make the village rich and wanted to get ahead, which is a bit ordinary!"

"And the most bloody thing is that Tazmi was cheated out of all his money by his eldest sister as soon as he came to the imperial capital, and he could only be forced to sleep on the streets, which is also too miserable. "

"At present, the story of Mr. Blank is indeed a bit bland compared to "Game Life Zero", but don't worry, there are still some remarkable points in this story. "

"That's right, for example, what is the earth dragon that Tazmi killed, and who is the big sister who cheated Tazmi out of money?"

Seeing this, the audience couldn't help but discuss.

Most viewers who have watched "Game Life Zero" think this story is rather old-fashioned.

It's not much different from a normal adventure story.

is also the story of a young man in a mountain village who went out and finally broke into a world.

Of course, there are also some viewers who are not in a hurry to express their opinions.

After all, this is just the beginning.

"Editor-in-chief, what do you think of this opening? How do I feel that it is also very ordinary? Could it be that Mr. Su Ming has no better inspiration?"

Araya agrees with everyone that the beginning of this story is relatively ordinary.

Of course, this ordinariness is for the setting of Game Life Zero.

After all, Jewel is in front.

But it's still better than ordinary works.

"Hehe, this is just the beginning, don't jump to conclusions. Yae Miko chuckled and shook her head, "And this paragraph has also explained a lot of hidden things, but everyone hasn't paid attention." "

"Hidden settings?"

Araya was stunned, why didn't she see any hidden settings?

Yae Miko smiled and stretched out a finger, "First, the protagonist Tazmi and two companions have been separated, this should be a foreshadowing, and the next two companions should appear." "

"Second, the two travelers who were rescued by Tazmi told him that the imperial capital was prosperous but extremely dark, which is obviously on point, because we know from the beginning that this is a story of the overthrow of a corrupt empire. "

"As for whether this corrupt empire is the imperial capital, it is not clear for the time being. "

"Third ....."

"And a third??"

Araya was shocked when she heard the whole person, but she didn't expect the editor-in-chief to see so many details that she didn't see.

"Of course there is a third. Yae Miko smiled and stretched out a third finger and said, "This third... It's just some of the setting questions, like why is Tazmi's strength so strong, and what is the earth dragon, and who is the big sister who cheated him out of his money?"

Bang Bang Bang!!

"The editor-in-chief is really amazing!"

Araya was full of applauded admiration.

If it weren't for the editor-in-chief saying this, she wouldn't have discovered that there were so many problems hidden in this simple paragraph.

"Look at it!"

Yae Miko smiled, then looked at the big screen expectantly.

She's looking forward to the rest of the story.

The opposite is the other side.

The lady looked at the big screen with her hands on her chest, listening to the constant discussion in her ears, and she couldn't help but look at the works in room 30.

"Cut! boring trick!"

The lady wasn't interested in the story, and if it weren't for staring at someone, she wouldn't be a judge.

It's boring.

Soon the voices of the entire church soon fell silent.

All that remains is the voice of Ove introducing contestant No. 18060.

Of course, most of the audience's eyes are on Room 30.

[Just as the penniless Tazmi is sleeping on the streets.

A blonde lady came up to him.

"Are you from out of town?"

"Ahh

Tazmi looked confused, not knowing what the blonde lady in front of her was going to do.

However, the other party's golden hair made him vigilant, after all, eating a trench grows a wisdom!

"If you don't have a place to live, do you want to come to my house?"

The blonde lady invited with a smile.

Tazmi, who had just been deceived, was not overjoyed, but showed a suspicious expression.

"I... There's no money!"

"If you had the money, you wouldn't spend the night in this kind of place!"

The blonde lady said cheerfully.

It was clear that Tazmi's situation was understood, and that was the reason for the invitation.

"There's no way Miss Arya can see a guy like you left alone!"

"Just accept it with gratitude!"

Seeing that he was hesitant, the two guards behind the blonde lady spoke up to persuade him.

"How?"

Blonde lady Arya put her hands behind her back and asked playfully and cutely again.

"It's better than sleeping on the streets......

Seeing that this blonde lady was so gentle and lovely, Tazmi subconsciously agreed.

"Then it's decided!"

Arya smiled brightly when she saw him agree.

A moment later.

Tazmi was taken to a noble manor.

Looking at the amiable family in front of him, Tazmi was sure that he had met a noble person this time.

Arya's parents communicate with Tazmi and learn that he has been separated from his two friends.

So he decided to ask the army to help him find a partner.

This made Tazmi even more convinced that there were also good people in the imperial capital.

However, it was the next night.

The aristocratic mother was full of joy and prepared to go back to her room to write a diary.

But the next second, he was stopped and cut off.

Until the time the body was separated, the noble mother still had a smile on her face.

"Huh?"

"Excuse me!"

A purple-haired woman with glasses shook the blood from the huge scissors in her hand.

Meanwhile.

Rick's movement also alerted Tazmi.

He hurried out the door to check on the situation.

That's just at this time.

Under the blood moon outside the window.

"That's ...... ...... night raid?"

Tazmi looked at the figures outside the window in shock, exactly the same as what he saw on the wanted notice in the imperial capital today.

That is, there is a killer coming.

And the strength of these night raids is really the same as rumored.

Even in the face of three powerful guards, they can still be killed effortlessly.

This terrifying strength shocked Tazmi.

But he still didn't hesitate to protect Miss Arya.

Meanwhile.

The aristocratic lord is being tightly choked by the neck, and in the meantime begging the killer for mercy.

......。

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