HP Approaches the Magical World

　　 Joanne is a talented person, like the Lady Rowling in Jon’s memory, this girl indeed has a very strong literary talent.

It’s just that the lady in Jon’s memory, without knowing anything about the magical world, completed the long masterpiece "Harry Potter" alone, and now Joanne, who is next to Jon, is right The wizarding world actually understands.

　　 In the book created under this situation, some of the content in it should be better than the content in Jon’s memory.

Jon can’t remember in the original book. The first chapter describes the description of Professor Dumbledore and McGonagall when the boy who survived the catastrophe was introduced eleven years ago. What was said in the conversation between them, Jon remembers It's not very clear. He just remembered the light extinguisher and the cat crouching on the corner, and Hagrid descended from the sky on a motorcycle.

　　 Then there is no more. Jon could remember not much. Of course, he picked the main spells and plot notes, followed by the big story plots and characters, and finally was the memory.

　　 Originally, Jon thought that he would remember a lot of specific descriptions when he reached Privet Road, just like when he went to Ollivander a year ago, he was in the store and recalled the classic description.

I can't remember the content of the books I have read. There may be many explanations for this kind of thing, or it is because the loss of time has consumed Jon’s spirit, or new things occupy his memory space, or even, in Hull. After Jia changed his worldview several times, he began to gradually forget those things related to the past.

　　 There are too many explanations to talk about.

　　 In the final analysis, it is always because those things are no longer important.

　　 The world seems to be the same world. There is no change. The sun will still rise and cast light over the garden, illuminating the copper nameplate inlaid on the wall in front of the house;

　　The people in the house go out to work day after day,

　　 Every night is exactly the same, except that I go to my room to sleep after eating, occasionally watch TV, and occasionally relax with my lover.

　　 There are only photos hanging on the fireplace, showing the passing of time and the growth and aging of people.

　　Time is like this.

　　 "Our life is actually spent in such a time."

　　 Jon completed today's magic practice—just Occlumency and his own dementia, and then opened the door.

　　 Nine o'clock is neither too early nor too late. When Jon went downstairs, Joanne had already prepared bread and milk for him, and she collated the manuscript on the table by herself.

　　 There are not many finished manuscripts. After reading the ideas of the first chapter of Jon's new edition, Joanne was inspired, and she spilt several pages of paper, all of which were completed last night and this morning.

　　 "Get up? Come over for dinner, and take a look at this chapter by the way."

　　 Joanne greeted, and Jon walked over obediently.

　　 There is no major problem with the previous content of Chapter 1. According to Jon, it was introduced from the Dursleys, emphasizing the Dursleys’ aversion and conflicts towards the wizarding world, as well as the celebration of the wizards.

"I think you can add a little bit of content here. I think if you want to portray Dumbledore’s character, then you can actually work **** his clothes. You should have Dumbledore in your MI0 file. Of your photos?"

　　 "Yes, there are, but I always think this is not good. After all, Mr. Dumbledore's strength is beyond our imagination. I am worried..."

　　 "Don't worry about this, I will find a time to bring this matter up to Mr. Dumbledore, and find a way to get him to agree with our plan-in fact, this plan was originally helpful to Dumbledore's ideas.

But until then, your writing should be kept confidential. Except for the person in charge of MI0, it’s best not to spread it out. You should also say the same to the person from the Ministry of Magic, just say your first meaning, don’t Let him perceive a deeper meaning.

　　 And, didn’t I tell you before, the main character in your story should be our ‘Boy who survived’, not Dumbledore. If you write too much about Dumbledore, will it be a bit distracting? "

"But this is not appropriate. You don't want me to write you in the story. I can accept this. But according to what you said, Mr. Dumbledore has high hopes for Harry Potter, so he will definitely pay attention all the time. Harry Potter, how can we not only reduce his content, but also reflect his ability and care for Harry? Without this guide, how can Harry Potter grow up? ?"

　　 "Misery helps people grow, and so does responsibility."

Jon took a sip of milk: "The content of the first two chapters is mainly to explain the cause and course of Harry Potter's life here. This book faces the Muggle society rather than the wizarding society. You should understand what I said. Mean it."

Joanne nodded. Of course she understood what Jon meant. UU reading www.uukanshu.com Muggle society’s yearning for mysterious powers would make them interested in this wizard from the very beginning, and there is nothing like a Muggle family. The little wizard who grew up in it can make people feel more immersive-if the little wizard's experience is miserable, then sympathy will be more able to bring people into the role quickly.

　　 This is a technique commonly used when writing fairy tales. It gives readers a more comfortable reading experience by giving the protagonist a tragic past and a bright future. There is only one problem.

　　 "According to this line of thinking, our description of Harry Potter's childhood is completely exaggerated to deal with it, but can't it take too long?"

"Of course, you have to know that although literary creation can be slightly fictional, Harry Potter is a wizard after all, and a wizard with super prestige. We cannot describe too much about his tragic childhood, which would destroy him. The image in the minds of the wizards, just write a little bit to let him be pityed, you should be able to grasp this scale?

　　Joanne certainly has this ability, or that the writing itself has this ability, but it is somewhat different according to the writer's own writing habits and application of techniques.

　　 As she was about to write down and start revising her notes, the doorbell suddenly rang.

　　 Jon put down the cup and was about to open the door when Joanne had already stood up over there.

　　 "Let me go."

　　 She glanced at Jon and asked:

　　 "Who will come so early?"

　　 Jon also glanced at the envelope on the side of the coffee table and smiled slightly.

　　 "Yes, our guest has arrived."