I'm the top student in Conan, but I'm actually an onmyoji.

When she mentioned her work, Asami's focus suddenly shifted. She crossed her arms in front of her and said, "You still know literature? I don't think you have even read The Old Man and the Sea."。”

“Image, your elegant image just now is gone. "

Sagawa Yan found that he really liked teasing this Asami sister. Maybe it was because she acted so dignified and elegant that he couldn't help but want to see what was behind this elegance.。

“you! "

Uchida Asami gasped again.

Sagawa Yan knew that he had to come up with something real, otherwise the girl in front of him might really have to leave regardless. Although

literature and sociology are looked down upon by the academic system, there are still some, lv0 literature Coupled with his own experience in his previous life, it is more than enough to teach the girl in front of him.。

“Have you read all the works of Hugo, Dante, and Goethe? Let me, a math major, tell you about the problems in your work. "

Sagawa Yan evilly re-read the words "mathematics department"。

“First of all, you haven’t figured out the positioning of your work. It’s okay for you to imitate others in your text, but when you imitate Master Haruki Murakami, you also try to add the style of Master Kawabata Yasunari, and in the end you become completely different.。”

“If you want to write critical literature about serious literature, but also write about handsome men and beautiful heroines to please young readers, the result can only be displeasing to both sides. "

Asami was stimulated by this merciless criticism, but she couldn't help but admit that what the other party said was right. She, who was often praised for her works, had never thought of this problem. Just like the lemon

pie she made, once again Someone pointed it out unceremoniously, but compared to Kudo's junior, this guy is much more hateful!

She hated it and wanted to hear the other person continue talking. Only by knowing the problem can the problem be solved.

But that The damn guy suddenly stopped talking!!

“Hey, why don't you continue talking? Asami

asked。

“You have to ask for advice politely, otherwise it will be gone. "

This guy is really annoying!

“Please, you, okay, okay, point, point! "

She asked word by word。

“Ahem, for the sake of your sincerity," he looked at Mami with a look that was about to get angry and continued quickly.

“Another problem with your work is that the plot is old-fashioned. Oldness is not a problem. Everyone is using old wine in new bottles. But the master has enough experience and knowledge to write works that contain profound understanding and emotion. You don't have these. I suggest you write something Light novels, etc., try to challenge traditional literature after you turn 30. "

Asami nodded repeatedly, but in the end she was confused, "What is a light novel?”

“Well, light novels are novels that are easy to read, so don't worry about these details. "

Although this guy is very annoying, he does have something.

Some long-standing doubts in his heart have been answered. Asami is not as angry as he was at first. He hesitated and said, "Hey, return my manuscript paper, I don't care. What you just did。”

“Sorry, this is the first work based on me, and I plan to keep it as a souvenir. "

Sagawa Yan smiled frivolously.

I really still hate this guy!

Seeing that he didn't want to return his things, Uchida Asami was ready to leave. If he stayed here, he might be angry to death.

Sagawa Yan didn't stop him. When Asami left, he Suddenly he said, "Hey, don't you leave a contact information? "

Humph, you are fascinated by this lady's beauty, but do you want to say it?

Asami stopped, a little hesitant.。

“I still hope to continue criticizing your novels. "

The girl turned her head sideways, and a gust of breeze blew up her hair. She pushed a strand of hair behind her ears and smiled very charmingly.

But the words she said were not so nice.。

“Go find it yourself, savage monkey, bye! "

After that, he quickly left without looking back.

Sagawa Yan didn't care, "My number is xxxx, remember it. "

Similarly, they turned around and left. A man and a woman left across the lawn in completely opposite directions. The boy had a smile on his lips, and the girl had a bit of embarrassment in her eyes.。

…

“Master, you are such a scumbag..."

The system seemed to be unable to stand it and took the initiative to speak.。

“This is not scum, this is fraternity. You don’t understand the system. "

Sagawa Yan retorted in his heart.

He did think so. Time travel undoubtedly freed him from the shackles, and the existence of the two systems allowed him to gradually let himself go. Following his

heart is his current principle.

Ability The bigger you get, the greater the responsibility.

But why can't the greater the ability, the stronger the desire.

Ring, ring, ring, the phone rang.

Who is it? It can't be Asami, calling so soon?

Yan Sagawa picked up the phone , Ishida’s voice came out。

“Sagawa, come back quickly, your verification results are out!”

“Mr. Ishida, what was the result?”

“Absolutely correct, exactly as written in your paper. Congratulations, you have completed a great conjecture! Through your guess we found 2 new Mersenne primes! "

Nice! "