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"It's okay, there's nothing to compare, neither is of the same type."

Su Chen didn't want to judge two works so simply by the difference.

Yinsha held her chin with her hands and thought for a while: "But, although "Lelouch the Rebel" is a mecha type, judging from your character creation, Lu Luxiu is an intelligent character, so isn't this work also an intelligent character? fight?"

"That's what it says..."

Su Chen took a sip of black tea and continued: "But the two are different in essence. The battle of wits in this work will not be as detailed as in "Death Note". After all, it is not a suspenseful romance. I will focus on the plot. of."

"Oh." Yinsha nodded half-understanding.

On the other hand, Feng Yu didn't raise his head, holding the manuscript of the first chapter and carefully reading it over and over again.

From time to time, the corner of the mouth still shows a silly smile of "嘿嘿嘿", which is terrifying.

She seemed to fall in love with the character of Lelouchi at first sight.

This is also understandable. After all, Lu Luxiu's ability is really cool. With a ray of light from his eyes, he can command the people he looks directly at. He is simply invincible. Coupled with his handsome appearance and super high IQ, he is indeed very popular with girls in the second grade.

In the animation back then, for some reason, a label of "female orientation" was added. It may be that this kind of tall and thin style of painting is more attractive to girls.

But those who read it will know.

This work is not the kind of superficial work that only looks at the face, on the contrary, Lu Luxiu's plot is simply incomparably exciting, the complex contradictions of various characters, and various plots of blade abuse, can be made into several movies up.

On the other hand, compared with the wits in "Death Note", most of the details of Lu Luxiu's wits are briefly mentioned, and the focus is on creating a compact plot and vivid characters.

After all, Lu Luxiu's golden hand is something similar to superpowers, while Ye Shenyue only uses foreign objects to commit crimes with high IQ. The development directions of the two wits are completely different, and there is nothing to compare.

If Ye Shenyue is an indifferent conspirator behind the scenes, then Lu Luxiu is a resourceful general who has both great wisdom in arranging tactics and terrifying organizational and commanding abilities.

The original official has clearly announced that Lu Luxiu can think about 13 different things in one second. From this we can see how terrifying this character like the big devil is.

After making a few more minor revisions to the comic, Su Chen threw the comic to editor Xinlan's mailbox for her review.

But at the same time, he also printed two drafts of the first chapter, and handed one to Yinsha and Fengyu, so that they could master this painting method as soon as possible.

Xin Lan of Penguin Comics also quickly noticed the news from Su Chen on the computer.

"The rebellious Lelouch?"

Xinlan tilted her head to look at the documents sent by the other party.

"This name is so-so."

She turned on the computer with a mutter, and after sending Su Chen "I have received it", she opened the manuscript and began to review it.

First of all, there is nothing to say about excellent painting skills.

Opening a new work, Mao Xuewang also began to show an unprecedented new painting technique,

The painting method is completely different from Death Note and Xiaobu.

Some readers can be conquered by drawing skills alone, which is also the most reassuring point of Xinlan.

Then look at the content.

The first chapter "The Day the Demon King was Born" has a lot of pages, but not much content.

Compared with the realistic background of "Death Note", Lelouchi's world view is obviously more grand, war, chaos, country, mecha, weapons, time, characters, etc... to be expressed than the first chapter of "Death Note" One word is too much.

If nothing else, let’s just look at the characters. In the first chapter of Death Note, the characters who will be involved in the plot in the follow-up are just Yagami, Yagami’s family, and Shinigami Ryuk.

There are only a handful of them.

Look at Lelouch, just the important characters in the first chapter, there are too many to count, such as Xiali, Mire, Rival, Uncle Orange, Clovis, Suzaku, C.C, Karen, Shan What I want... is to focus on the key points, and there will be more scenes of character creation later.

Xinlan swipe the mouse and look carefully.

It can be seen that Mao Xuewang has constructed a very large background setting this time.

But the story of the first chapter is simple and clear.

Aside from the foreshadowing of the many characters who appeared, the protagonist Lu Luxiu was accidentally involved in a terrorist attack in the first episode, that is, at the beginning, he encountered the mysterious girl C.C and signed a contract with her , obtained the mysterious king's power of "absolute obedience" from him.

It's quite routine to pretend to be aggressive before suppressing it.

It may also be a preconceived relationship. Xin Langan feels that this familiar golden finger acquisition is a bit similar to Ye Shenyue.

Of course, it's just a little bit like nothing more.

Lu Luxiu's process of obtaining the golden finger was even more bumpy, and the paintings on the open pages were extraordinarily cool.

It looks like hard work has been done.

It is estimated that Mao Xuewang wrote the painting himself - from the perspective of Xinlan's insight, other assistants can't draw this kind of feeling.

Generally speaking, it is much more attractive than Death Note's unremarkable start.

At least Xinlan thinks so.

【"You seem to have a reason to survive."

The girl's strange voice echoed in his mind.

It's unbelievable, like a dream.

"If you have strength, you can live, right? This is a contract."

"I will give you strength, and in exchange, you will grant me one wish."

"If you sign a contract, although you can still survive in this world, you will follow a different principle from humans."

"It's different from the law, different from time, different from life. Oh, the power of the king will make you lonely in the end, if you have this awareness...\