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Let's not talk about the topic of long-term development.

Looking back, Su Chen had already produced the complete script of "Oath in the Morning" and let everyone review it together.

Even store manager Xu was very interested, immersed in the story Su Chen constructed.

First of all, the composition method of "Morning Flowers and Evening Oath" is close to prose.

This is why some people find it fragmented.

But after seeing it clearly, the plot of the movie is actually just two lines.

One is the emotional thread of the heroines Maquia and Ariel.

And the other one is the secondary line of the second female "I Can Fly" Leilia's stomachache.

The former is to enrich the content of the theme, while the latter is to enrich the plot.

Throughout the film, Maquia is the main character, but Ariel is the main point of view.

It probably describes the story of the time when the girl Maquia was forced to stay away from her hometown and was bound by her "son" Ariel.

Maquia is not an ordinary girl. Her race, Ioruf, will stop growing after she turns fifteen years old, and her lifespan will last hundreds of years.

Maquia, who had experienced a change, met a lonely human baby who had gone through war in a certain place. Seeing that the baby was pitiful, she adopted him, named the baby "Ariel", and took the initiative to take on the responsibility of mother.

In this process, with the passage of time, Ariel gradually grew up, a child——a young man—a teenager—a youth...

However, Ariel is just an ordinary human being and cannot live as long as Maquia.

Seeing the other party grow up, his own appearance has not changed at all.

Their abnormal mother and son not only have a difficult life, but also stand the test of time.

During Maquia's upbringing, she learned the true meaning of love and the responsibility of being a mother. Ariel also grew up. After realizing her feelings for Maquia, in order not to drag her mother down, she left her and chose a Man becomes independent and becomes a soldier.

During this period, he became a family, gained iron-blooded comrades-in-arms, a wife who loved him, and a newborn daughter.

Many years later, Ariel lived a fulfilling life and became an octogenarian. When he was dying, he died of old age in front of his mother Maquia, whose appearance had not changed at all.

Watching Ariel leave peacefully, Maquia burst into tears in the dandelion field, but after crying, she let go and started a new life with the memories of Ariel in her heart .

At the end of the story, after a hundred years of life, Maquia finally understands that parting is not only pain, but also beautiful memories; love is not only loneliness, but also happiness.

The whole film interprets the profound interpretation of the word parting through family, friendship and love. Through a lot of pen and ink on Maqia Ariel's mother and daughter, it also allows the audience to understand love and growth.

As for the secondary line here, I won’t talk about it, and there is nothing to say.

The small details are indeed a bit flawed.

However, when an animated film pays too much attention to logic, it will lose its unique fairy tale flavor.

So some small loopholes in the secondary line are harmless.

Wait until everyone has read the script.

They admired Su Chen even more.

No matter where the theory of longevity is placed, it is a big knife.

Time, a person's life, a moment of glory, a person's troubles and darkness, parting... These keywords are powerful.

Everyone can't get tired of this kind of story, because as long as it is an individual, it will more or less resonate.

Especially Sun Wujiang, he thinks Mao Xuewang's script is too good!

The plot is more than enough to make a hardcore movie.

Can this really be done by one person?

It's too perverted!

He clicked his tongue inwardly.

It is worthy of being the author of "Four Lies", that is, it can perfectly tell this kind of story.

Sun Wujiang, who was greatly admired, expressed his heartfelt emotion: "Mr. Maoxuewang, I feel that the film you wrote can already be watched as an inspirational film for women's growth. I'm not kidding. After watching it, I will Some even want to worship you as a teacher."

"So, Mr. Sun Wujiang, do you think this script..."

"Just two words, excellent."

Sun Wujiang looked at Su Chen, and expressed his opinion with an exaggerated expression, it seemed that he was truly touched.

"Really, the audience of this film should be all women! It is completely a masterpiece wrapped in an animation shell!"

"Well……"

Store manager Xu put down a stack of scripts, looked at the table with complicated eyes, except for Su Xiaoxiao, all the elders, he hesitated to speak.

Forget it.

You're an insider, and you're right.

Su Chen also nodded indifferently in response to the other party.

To be honest, he didn't expect that Sun Wujiang's reaction and feedback would be so great.

However, the greater the reaction, the more it means that the other party can understand themselves.

Then, Sun Wujiang said excitedly again: "Teacher Mao Xuewang, we've already talked about this, let me interpret the theme of your work again."

"OK."

"Honestly speaking, I think the theme of your work is both simple and touching—you see the sadness of parting, but don't forget that accepting parting is hope." While he was eloquent, he was still observing Su Chen's reaction, trying to think about whether his guess is correct.

"What you said is absolutely right. The main purpose is just two words, parting. "Oath at Morning Blossoms and Evening" just wants to tell people the significance of parting."

Su Chen said meaningfully.

"None of us will never be separated. Human beings are a parting race. For us, we are also saying goodbye."

"yes."

As an experienced script writer, why couldn't Sun Wujiang see Su Chen's hints in the script?

The death of the dog from the beginning is a hint of parting.

After that, every advance of the plot.

It's all parting that Maquia experienced.

When she picked up Ariel, it was a farewell to the hometown of her tribe; the day she was going to meet Leilia was a farewell to the warm village; because she was searched, she just wanted to move and start a new life. Because Ariel insisted on joining the army, it turned into a farewell to Ariel.

In the process, Maquia's perception of parting is also slowly changing.

In the end, he ran into Ariel on the battlefield and delivered the child of Ariel's wife with his own hands. It was the first time that Maquia chose to leave on his own initiative.

At the end, Maquia returned to Ariel's side and witnessed the last moment of the old man's life...

This time, it was her parting from Ariel's entire life.

Later, she took Dandelion from Ariel's great-granddaughter, and Dandelion's words happened to be "love that cannot stay".

Every parting is a sublimation of the theme.

In the end, Teacher Mao Xuewang also used his lines to give the final interpretation of the farewell.

【"The elder will also laugh, because you let her understand that parting is not only painful."

"Get in the car, let's go, let's meet a new farewell."】

"Especially the final farewell, it's so well written!"

Sun Wujiang was full of praise.

"When the mother returns to the original village, she will not grow old, and her adopted son has become an octogenarian. Without too many words or actions, everything is over quietly like this. I have to say that the plot of this story The way it was handled was really great.”

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