It Would Be Great If I Could Be a Copywriter

The content of the first volume ends here.

Yuzu took a deep breath.

After reading it, what should I say?

She felt that this time, the other party's style really changed a lot.

It's not as deep as the previous two works at all.

Although the friendship and entanglements of these adolescent girls are described in detail, no matter it is compared with the deep feelings in "Violet Evergarden" or the forgotten fate in "Your Name", it seems too mediocre No wonder.

Of course, this does not mean that Su Chen's level has dropped.

The mediocrity is the truth, and mediocrity is the root of all stories.

However, the sudden change of style made Yuzu quite uncomfortable.

As for the good details in this work, as a sharp-eyed editor, she can list no less than ten of them.

The little ghost who is worthy of the title of "Blade God of War" undoubtedly makes the characters more vivid and complex by portraying the characters' inadvertent movements, expressions, and attitudes in the works.

For example, after An Ming had an argument with Mrs. Ren and left, he started to walk quickly to a slow stop, and then stared at his hands...

It's like when Rentai was hit by Ah Xue, and when he uttered evil words to the face, his gaze was slightly tilted...

The psychological dynamics and character characteristics of the characters expressed in countless subtle characterizations, and the information revealed can be clearly and intuitively received by the audience.

It is the mixing of these details in daily life that makes the story real and the characters full.

After reading all the text of the first volume, Yuzu couldn't help but look up again, staring at Su Chen.

"What do you always watch me do?"

Su Chen looked at him with disgust.

If you don't review the manuscript well, you always look up at me...

If you want to use a beauty trick, just say so.

But before I say it, even if you post me back, I won't write an outline for you (seriously).

"Your new work is really different from the previous ones."

Yuzu sighed lightly, not knowing how to describe it.

Su Chen half-jokingly said: "How do you say? Is it bound to be popular?"

"Fire should be able to fire..." Yuzu, "However, your work this time does not have any plots such as stomachaches, which makes me feel so unreal."

A whole basket of blades was prepared for nothing.

As she said that, she pinched her own face. This was the second time she did this today.

"God, my stomach hurts, when did I write that kind of plot." Su Chen's face darkened.

These few such excellent emotional works are actually called stomachache by you?

It's just too much!

anyway.

He can probably guess the reason why the other party told him that.

After all, the first volume, that is, the plot of the first half of the animation, is really nothing to watch, and the ordinary daily life is slowly full of foreshadowing.

If it weren't for Su Chen's fame here, Yuzi would have thought it was a hit.

With such a close-to-people plot, Yuzu has nothing to point and comment on.

After that, I took some time to determine the typesetting sequence of the illustrations and some precautions, and the publication is basically a certainty.

When Yuzu returns, he will contact the publishing house, and then officially release it as soon as possible.

——This is exactly what the editor-in-chief and all the senior executives mean. For a top-notch light novel writer like Teacher Xiaogui, the sooner the release, the better.

But Yuzu just came here today. According to the arrangement in advance, she will stay here for a period of time, which is the so-called inspection work.

Authors who can enjoy this treatment are rare.

"Is your shop quite big?"

After the audit work, Yuzu also stretched her waist and observed the situation in the lounge.

From the configuration point of view, this lounge is actually more luxurious than the apartment she lived in in Shanghai, which is really outrageous.

Especially the bed.

There was actually a euro single bed for sleeping in and a day bed for resting during the day.

Not only that, a brand new LCD TV, a household refrigerator, a solid wood wardrobe, a small coffee table, a solid wood table...

Damn, is this heaven?

Feeling the soft touch of the day bed, the fatigue all over her body made her wish to lie down now and have a good sleep.

After traveling all the way, my neck and shoulders were sore from being stuck in the seat of the plane.

"This bed is really nice, I think I'll sleep here at night."

Tentatively, she said this to Su Chen, Yuzu was already eager to try, and planned to half lie on the bed.

Su Chen said without any fluctuation in tone: "Oh, that's my bed, I sleep there if I can't get home after working overtime."

"Eh?"

Yuzu was stunned, then sat up in embarrassment, her cheeks were slightly hot, and she couldn't stop coughing dryly.

"I'm lying to you, how can there be overtime in this store? Basically everything in this lounge is new." Su Chen showed a happy smirk, "If you want to stay, I have no objection."

"Ahem, no need..." Grapefruit's voice was as thin as a mosquito.

It's just a lounge, how could she really live here!

His eyes moved away in embarrassment, and soon, a machine in the corner attracted Yuzu's attention.

It was a plain black foot massager.

This is a massage device used to relieve fatigue. It is about the size of a rice cooker. Once the power is turned on, the switch is pressed, and then you put your feet into it, and you can enjoy the pleasure of foot massage.

The constantly rotating mechanical roller inside can massage the feet naturally and comfortably.

For those social animals with too much workload, it is a decompression artifact.

"Hey, do you still have this thing?"

Pointing to the foot massager, Yuzu was a little tempted.

She has used this machine once, and it is a rare and convenient machine for a person like her who doesn't spend much on massage.

Su Chen glanced at the direction the other party was pointing at. It is said that store manager Xu bought this thing in the early days to prepare for the prosperity of the store in the future, and said that it was used to reward the employees.

But in fact, this store has never been prosperous at all, and no one has lived in such a luxurious lounge, let alone a foot massager.

Since the day after I bought it, this instrument has been sitting in a corner eating ashes until now.

"Oh, what are you talking about? You can use it if you want, you're welcome, it's also new."

So he responded casually and took out the instrument disapprovingly.

Eyes flickered, Yuzu accepted it after being polite a few times.

These days, her workload is not small, and she has to travel across the city, which is really tiring.

After taking off her slippers generously and inserting her feet into the instrument, she turned on the power.

buzz buzz --

A slight vibrating sound sounds, which means that the instrument has started to work.

"Well--"

The warm and comfortable touch immediately intoxicated Yuzu.

It's comfortable. It's comfortable.

Su Chen opened another bottle of juice, chatting with the other party casually.

at the same time.

What he never imagined was...

outside the door.

Yinsha and Fengyu were attracted by this unusual vibrating sound, and crouched by the door full of concern.

Like two spies sneaking into the enemy's interior.

"This... what is this sound? No, it can't be that one?"

Feng Yu lowered his voice, and looked at Yin Sha with a small face in horror.

The latter gave her a silent gesture, with a serious expression, and at the same time, his ears were pressed against the door panel, listening attentively.

Seeing this, Feng Yu took a deep breath, followed Yin Sha's example, and leaned on the door panel with a firm face.

At the same time, she was still silently saying "This is worrying about the teacher", "This is worrying about the teacher", "It's definitely not eavesdropping", "It's definitely not eavesdropping"...

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