Marvel: We Are Venom

First I would like to make it clear, I am not going to stop this romance, I am also not going to leave this romance.

Please, you can relax.

Context: I was here in my secluded apartment while suffering the pain of COVID-19 until a friend of mine at Discord recommended me a book on Greek mythology, I was so fissured in this world that without me realizing it, I made a sketch of a romance +18. lol T_T

I really have to look for what to do ...

Anyway, I published a draft of two thousand words of this original novel, so I want you to look and tell me what you think, I accept any constructive criticism.

As you know, I am a novice author, I really don't know how to write a good novel yet.

The name of the original novel is Eros: the God of Olympus

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Outburst: PLEASE stop calling me disgusting! just because you don't like i.n.c.e.s.t, you don't need to offend the author.

As I said before, this romance is not i.n.c.e.s.t, Adrian is not Leona's son !! F.u.c.k!

Last week I received an evaluation calling me disgusting and giving me a low rating, the person who did this did not even explain or give a constructive opinion about the novel.

But I know that there are people like that, after all, they want to force their selfish d.e.s.i.r.es on the author, because of that many authors stop writing, it is simply unbearable!

1: I will not give in to your selfish d.e.s.i.r.es, I will accept suggestions and constructive tips to learn how to improve, but I will not change my romance because you don't like it. I am the author, not you.

2: This is a relatively slow story, I like to develop the story, but if you notice that I am too slow please let me know.

have a nice day.