My Adventures In Nasuverse

Chapter 20 - Fixing My Previous Mistakes

Hey, it's been a while. Well, as the title stated, I'll be fixing the previous chapters before I continue with this fanfic.

Things I'll be fixing.

1st - My MC

After playing Devil May Cry 5 again, I knew I Fu*ked up. Vergil is out of character. That is one of my main reason I'm fixing the previous chapters.

2nd - Dialogue writing styles

I'm fixing the dialogue writing styles.

I know many of you are dissatisfied with my previous way of writing the dialogue. I'm fixing that.

Things I will not fix

1st - Harem members being much stronger than the main character.

I'm not fixing this.

OP magus, OP servant, and OP loli were in his harem. I'm keeping them the same as they were.

2nd - The main character getting Yamato from Devil May Cry.

Yeah, I'm not changing that. He will still get it as compensation from Truck-sama.

3rd - Most of the story line will be the same.

Yup, I'm not changing the direction I'm going. Too lazy to change.

I'll uploading fixed version of chapter 1 in 5 minutes.

Thank you!

Your lazy author,

Zimrence

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