My Girlfriend is More Than Beautiful

Chapter 116: Look at the circle ===

"The initial setting is twins, and then the reversal of Buddha and Demon, the overall copy is biased towards reasoning."

"Ok."

After listening to Li Ziqian's brief summary, Mo Nanbei nodded.

Then the two fell silent for a while.

Li Ziqian was thinking, and Mo Nanbei was waiting.

This process lasted for more than five minutes.

After all, this is a thinking from scratch, and it is normal to have a long period of confusion at the beginning.

For example, Mo Nanbei's own new book.

Now she has a simple phrase for her concept of her new book:

——The daily diary of Zaun-flavored dog food.

She has absolutely no idea about what to start with, how to set it up, how to water her career line, how to distribute daily dog ​​food, and how to handle events.

She hopes that her daily life can be written completely and perfectly, but writing certain things will be very boring, and she is also worried about it.

For example, the daily life of a writer or something.

It is nothing more than catching fish, watching movies and novels, recording the content of film and television dramas and memes, incorporating your own ideas and viewpoints, conceiving novels, discussing plots with like-minded people, and bragging about each other.

That's it.

It is very busy and brain-consuming for the writer himself.

but.

I always feel that writing it is more relish for writers and people who want to read it, but for some people, it may be meaningless water.

Reasonable, but imagine the tragic situation in the comment area after she wrote it, she has a big head.

It is the first time to be a human being, who wants to be misunderstood by their efforts?

And other than that, the school day...

Good guy, go to school everyday.

Monday: writing papers; Tuesday: writing papers; Wednesday: writing papers; Thursday: writing papers; Friday: writing papers…

Hu Shi's diary directly calls the expert, okay?

It's not like this kind of thing appears in the text:

Mo Nanbei, Mo Nanbei, you can't be so depraved anymore!

How can there be so much positive energy in your life!

You are going to find Li Ziqianpu!

You are going to fish for color!

You can no longer write papers, study hard, and code carefully!

You can't do this anymore!

...

Next Monday: Writing papers.

Grass.

Just thinking about it, she felt that this Nima was a very real human suffering.

A bit big.

But I want to write a little longer...

Just when Mo Nanbei was thinking about it, Li Ziqian seemed to have finally thought of something. He continued to Mo Nanbei,

"Just... it is assumed that the Buddha is actually a demon, because the Buddha's transformation from a demon into a Buddha.

This is my initial idea. "

"Huh? What about the follow-up?".

She understands the logical relationship that Li Ziqian is talking about now, but what is the difference between this and what the two of them took and discussed at the beginning?

When Mo Nanbei expressed doubts and waited, Li Ziqian continued to explain,

"The Buddha's setting is an eminent monk, so the question is why an eminent monk is a demon.

If the devil reincarnates into a Buddha and loses his amnesia about his previous life, his true nature is gradually exposed as he grows up... How do you feel about this unfolding? "

While muttering, Li Ziqian turned to Mo Nanbei for advice.

"Ok…"

Regarding this issue, Mo Nanbei did not hesitate or think for too long, she responded to Li Ziqian,

"I don't think it's right."

"Huh?? Explain in detail."

Li Ziqian frowned slightly, raised his hand and knocked on the table, waiting for Mo Nanbei's answer.

He still wanted to hear Mo Nanbei's objections. After all, the two of them are now discussing the setting from scratch, and it would be better if they disagree.

Nothing can be settled in one go.

Only after constant scrutiny and discussion, what is written is good.

This is Li Ziqian's personal thoughts.

In addition, he unexpectedly enjoyed the process of discussing the setting with Mo Nanbei and gradually conceiving the plot.

Although, this is the first time the two of them have had such a discussion.

However, before the confession, ever since Li Ziqian realized that he had a little crush on Mo Nanbei, such a scene had flashed in his mind countless times.

If you can discuss things you like, discuss novels, and think about the plot together with her, it must be a very interesting and enjoyable thing...

The reality is, it really is.

Looking at Mo Nanbei frowning slightly, the corners of his mouth slightly upturned, a few strands of broken hair tangled behind his ears, stretched out and slumped on the coffee table with his chin, he was lazy and a little serious, he thought maybe this was the so-called so-called The life and the years are peaceful.

As a result, he is in a very happy mood now.

"I don't think these two people were good at first." While Li Ziqian sighed, Mo Nanbei expressed her opinion.

"What's the meaning?"

Li Ziqian didn't understand Mo Nanbei's somewhat abstract way of describing it.

Nothing, what do you mean?

Subsequently, Mo Nanbei continued to explain,

"That is, in the beginning, none of them were Buddhas, and none of them were demons. It was only because of their growth that they became Buddhas and demons respectively."

"I think this will shape the human nature more comprehensively, and it will be more convenient for the reasoning to progress layer by layer.

If it is the setting of reincarnation, there is always a feeling of imperial order.

I don't like it very much, just... Personally, I don't think it will be very interesting to read, and the impact of this reversal will not be very strong, after all, it is the reincarnation of the emperor. "

Mo Nanbei explained her thoughts to Li Ziqian in detail, and after listening to Mo Nanbei's statement, Li Ziqian thought for a while and said,

"Well, you're right, so back to the question just now."

"uh-huh?"

"Then why is a Buddha a devil?"

"Well... I think this setting can be a bit more royal." Mo Nanbei continued.

"Like?"

"That is, because of paranoia, persistence, and obsession with something, he became a Buddha."

"The simplest, as you mentioned earlier, the eldest of the twins was regarded as a child prodigy for some reason. He could be lost because of the popularity of others, and he forgot his surname, so he became a demon."

Listening to Mo Nanbei's suggestion, Li Ziqian thought for a while, and then he said in denial,

"I think this setting is a bit inappropriate.

If it just floats, the character creation will not be very full.

The 'attachment' is good...but what should he be attached to if he is an eminent monk?

I don't know much about Buddhism, but generally speaking, these monks want to cultivate, and then cut off their emotions and desires.

Am I going to start with this?

That's right, this monk is virtuous on the surface, but in fact he does all kinds of evil. "

"Well...it's okay, but there are always some small remnants."

"why?"

"I can't tell..."

Mo Nanbei thought for a while.

According to Li Ziqian's idea, it is not impossible.

However, for some unknown reason, after hearing this story, she always had some subtle feelings.

Just, I always feel that this story is not particularly exciting for her personally, nor is it particularly in line with her psychological expectations for this kind of setting.

However, touching her soft and big conscience, she said that this setting is definitely watchable.

After all, monk flower or something, if it is shaped well, it is actually a kind of villain with charisma.

Huang Tian is above me, and I am inseparable from gambling and drugs.

It gives a sense of authenticity.

Just like the yellow-browed ancestor in the previous black myth.

This monk's character can be completely copied from this.

He said some high-sounding words that sounded very reasonable, but actually had a fart truth.

Without killing, hatred will never end.

Do not steal, strength is as different as I am.

Not lewd, all sentient beings are evil.

Do not lie, the dream bubble is empty.

Not craving for wine, worrying about the ups and downs.

Don't delay, just a moment of youth.

If you don't sleep, you can't get rid of suffering.

Do not indulge in desires, all acts are of no interest.

Shape it, and this character will actually come out.

Mo Nanbei can be sure that Li Ziqian is thinking the same as himself.

But... just a little sad.

She couldn't figure out exactly where the remnants were.

On the other side, Li Ziqian couldn't sit still while looking at Mo Nanbei in silence. He raised his hand and knocked on Mo Nanbei's head, and complained angrily to him,

"You made a special comment, said a sad thought, and then there was no follow-up.

Are you kidding me? "

Mo Nanbei: ?

"No, I didn't play with you, don't talk nonsense, we are innocent."

Li Ziqian: ? ?

Why is this guy so skinny?

You owe it again, don't you?

Why didn't he start a group, and this person jumped up on his own initiative?

"Oh so, what, are you implying that when you say this?"

"Grass, can you not just pick up a topic and open it to me! Discuss novels! Academic topics! Show me some respect! Hula!!!!"

Speaking of which, Mo Nanbei couldn't help raising his hand and knocking on the coffee table in front of him, as if he was frantically emphasizing to Li Ziqian that "be more serious".

But...

This will only make Li Ziqian feel a different kind of visual shock.

"Whoever drives first, and..."

When Li Ziqian wanted to say something and then do something, Mo Nanbei suddenly had a flash of inspiration, and she thought of the reason why she suddenly felt a little sad.

She actually has a deep obsession with such a highly respected role.

The core point of her obsession is that she has always had a character setting in her heart that she liked and wanted to write, but because she was writing everyday texts, she had nowhere to start.

"I figured it out!"

Mo Nanbei suddenly exclaimed, interrupting Li Ziqian's spellcasting.

"What did you think of?" Li Ziqian asked Mo Nanbei.

"I think about why I feel sad!!"

"you say."

"Well, I just saw a story before, and I really like the character of the monk in it."

Then, Mo Nanbei organized the language in his head and told Li Ziqian the story.

"That's right, this monk is a very kind monk.

He practiced painstakingly every day, saved sentient beings, and preached sutras and recitations for the villagers.

But he was born at an untimely time. In that era, there were many wars and chaos, the people could not live, and it just so happened that the gods were not beautiful. There were frequent famines and droughts at that time, and many people died in such disasters.

Most of the people are struggling to survive, and there is no difference between living and dying.

They feel absolutely terrified of this era and this world, and even say that "living is a pain".

This is a kind-hearted monk. He used his small savings from the rich to help these suffering villagers, but these things he did were nothing but a drop in the bucket and could not change anything at all. , even the villagers of a village cannot help.

He was very painful and annoyed. He had cultivated as a Buddha all his life, but in the end he could not save all sentient beings.

Look at the villagers who suffer every day, the villagers who come to him every day for help, listen to the thanks of the villagers who have been rescued by him, and listen to the shouts of the villagers who he cannot save...

Finally, he made a decision.

He wants to sit here, use his merits to move the heavens, and use the blessings and mana he has cultivated to give back to these mortal beings when he attains the Tao.

So, he picked a day and let these villagers bury him.

He wants to sit in a vat.

After three days, if he still maintains the appearance of chanting, it means that he succeeded in sitting.

Specifically, this should be a more rigorous Buddhist explanation, but I can't remember it, but I remember that this setting should be very comprehensive, and there is indeed such a similar statement. "

While telling the story, as if to ensure the integrity of what he told, Mo Nanbei suddenly added such a sentence to Li Ziqian.

"Well, it's alright, keep talking."

Li Ziqian nodded, indicating that he understood what Mo Nanbei wanted to express, and then motioned for Mo Nanbei to continue telling his story.

He was quite interested in the story.

"Well, I continue.

Then the villagers, as agreed, buried the monk on the ground after he sat in the jar

The light gradually disappeared from the monk's eyes.

He can't see anything.

There is nothing to eat, nothing to drink, nothing necessary to survive, and even limited oxygen.

The monk shook the vajra bell in his left hand and the vajra pestle in his right hand, and recited the Buddha's name one by one.

He is waiting to die.

However, at this time, his heart was disturbed.

He started to get scared.

What he feared was not his own death, but the voice in his own heart.

'When can I sit still. ’

'When will I die. ’

'Can I really become enlightened? ’

'No, I can't have distractions, I can't fail, I have to sit here, right now. ’

'I must be enlightened, I must succeed, because only then can I save them. ’

When such thoughts appear in his mind, no matter how he chants sutras or Buddha's names, no matter how much he concentrates, he will not be able to calm down.

In the end, the monk is "sitting".

It started to rain, just as the monk had expected.

Three days later, the villagers dug out the monk and knocked off the sealed lid on the tank.

They found that the monk was sitting inside, just as he said.

In their view, the monk is enlightened.

The villagers who were grateful to him for the village offered flowers to the monk, paid homage, and built a temple dedicated to his body.

But in fact, the monk did not attain the Dao. He sat in meditation but not completely.

He became a demon because of this kind of dedication, because of the earnest expectations of the villagers, and because of the 'obligations' and 'you should' that everyone kept talking about during his lifetime.

He exudes a pure aura that is invincible and unattainable for ordinary people, but in fact, his core has long been no different from an evil spirit.

He was tortured and condemned by himself all the time. It was this kind of entanglement and the shackles of his previous thinking that made him become an evil spirit that made everyone around him tremble.

This is that story. "

"Ok……"

After listening to Mo Nanbei's story, Li Ziqian fell silent for a while.

I have to say, this story is very exciting, and it gave him a lot of ideas.

This setting is 100% flawless.

Compared with the previous monk who was full of crooked truths, this character will be more full, not papery.

And very ironic.

In a sense, it will be more in line with the setting of this reversal of the Buddha and the devil.

Because it is not only because of the obsession with 'life', but also because of the attachment in the heart, the so-called goodwill attachment, that will fall into this end, and even some other people, that is, passers-by, can be invisible to this end. The language pressure exerted by the eminent monks, etc...

Such a plot line immediately plumps up, and the characters stand up.

"Wonderful." Thinking of this, Li Ziqian couldn't help but sigh.

"Hmm! Of course!!"

Listening to this wonderful word, Mo Nanbei knew that his idea was perfectly adopted.

very happy.

She raised her head and hummed at Li Ziqian a little proudly.

"Then what needs to be considered now is what characteristics the devil needs to have, and the character of the eminent monk is full.

The devil..."

While speaking, Li Ziqian began to think about his thoughts on the magic setting.

"First of all, this demon, he has to look strange."

What Li Ziqian said was serious, but Mo Nanbei, who was sitting beside him, almost spit out the drink he just drank after listening to it.

"Pfft... Hahahahaha, God is so strange."

"No, what are you laughing at?"

Li Ziqian, who was disturbed by Mo Nanbei's laugh, slapped Mo Nanbei on the head again, and asked her.

"What's wrong with this demon, hahahahaha, God is so strange, hahahahahahaha."

Mo Nanbei admitted that her laughter was low, but Li Ziqian's description was really hard for her to restrain her laughter.

The setting of the eminent monk is so lofty, since the original proposal, the eminent monk has never come down.

How to switch to the devil's side, it's not a big deal, he has already been labeled as "unremarkable, strange-looking".

This sense of contrast really made it hard for her to hold back.

Li Ziqian:  …

"Then what do you say.

Demons must have some characteristics, otherwise why would they say they are demons.

And for things like novels, sticking labels when writing is the most convenient way to identify them.

After all, I can't draw a guy with black gas all over like a cartoon and say this is a demon, right?

How to write it?

This guy who doesn't look like a good thing and exudes a dark aura, is he a devil?

Grass. "

Hearing Li Ziqianban's snarky explanation, Mo Nanbei's smile that had just stopped couldn't hold back.

"Pfft hahahaha, it's not impossible." She responded to Li Ziqian while banging on the table and laughing frantically.

"Well... just I think in order to make the setting right, this demon has to look like a demon.

The eminent monk is an eminent monk on the surface, but in fact the core has been broken, so the corresponding demon is not a good thing on the surface, but in fact it is kind, and their settings must be opposite.

Like the movie just now, that demon was covered with long hair..."

Before Li Ziqian could finish speaking, Mo Nanbei answered directly,

"Ominous old age, covered with red hair hahahahahaha."

"Well...it's not impossible to write this."

"Farewell, I'm afraid you'll be hacked to death when you go out. Hahahahahahahaha."

With that said, Mo Nanbei smiled rudely again.

Li Ziqian:  …

"Then what characteristics do you say?" At the end, he was really helpless. Li Ziqian sighed and asked Mo Nanbei, wanting to ask for her opinion.

After all, he felt that Mo Nanbei could laugh at what he said now.

The point is that Mo Nanbei's arrogant smile is indeed somewhat magical.

At once……

When looking at the fool and laughing, the joys and sorrows of human beings can be exchanged at this moment.

To Li Ziqian's question, Mo Nanbei responded like this:

"Just don't grow hair. I have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder. I can't stand this kind of thing, so I want to smash those black hairs off one by one."

Li Ziqian: ? ?

What a fetish.

"Grass, then why don't you lick your hair?", he complained to Mo Nanbei.

"Nima's, can this hair thing compare to that?"

"Then what? You haven't grown anywhere else yet?"

"Long, grass, you tell me why it doesn't grow."

"I didn't see that you couldn't stand it."

"I can't stand it, it's already been punished."

"Ah????" Li Ziqian said in shock.

"Ah????", Mo Nanbei didn't understand Li Ziqian's "Ah? ' something, responded like him.

"No, it's not that we don't believe you, we just want to learn more."

"Can you die for the Lord! Go away! Nima's!"

"How do you scold people? Besides, you said it first?"

"Grass! It's you who asked the question??"

"But you said that???"

"Damn it, that is to say, I can leave your question unanswered??? Huh????"

"Why, you still don't want to answer my question, do you?"

"no?"

"Then what are you talking about?"

Mo Nanbei: ? ? ? ?

No, why did the topic of the two of them come to this place?

Why is it her fault for arguing in the end?

Ok? ? ? ? ?

Where did this conversation start to get crooked? ? ? ?

Meow meow meow? ? ? ?

At this time, Mo Nanbei was a little confused.

She said that she needs to be quiet now.

When Mo Nanbei was quiet, Li Ziqian switched back to the serious man mode and thought about his settings.

"Then if there are twins...the strange-looking one will be thrown away, and then adopted...supported."

"No, you already said that it looks weird, why would anyone want to raise this thing?" After hearing it halfway, Mo Nanbei was not polite and started complaining directly.

"It's just... kind-hearted. The setting looks round."

"Well...it's not impossible, oh, by the way, Dororo has seen it, the strange shapes in there are also raised, so it's not impossible, just...well, it's good to have a little story about the adoptive father or the adoptive mother. Hmm... …”

"I've seen it, then whether it is a Buddha or a demon who raised him."

"what?"

Mo Nanbei didn't understand Li Ziqian's thoughts for a while.

"No, why does the devil want to support him?" she asked Li Ziqian.

"Because they look the same, they need to be raised."

"Grass."

It made sense, and she was completely powerless to refute it.

"What if it's a Buddha?" With a little curiosity, Mo Nanbei continued to ask Li Ziqian.

"Just... because you want to save him? You want to make him a good person?" Li Ziqian explained to Mo Nanbei after thinking for a few seconds.

"Well... in your setting, is this person who raised the devil an important role?"

"Well... no. It should be a passerby."

"Then I don't think there is any need for refinement, because it's not very important."

"Huh? How do you say it?"

"Is this demon or Buddha helpful to the male lead? Character? Character shaping, follow-up plot development or something? After all, isn't your book fast-paced, if there is such a character that is useless in the end? In fact, I don’t think it’s necessary to write it at all.”

Mo Nanbei explained his words to Li Ziqian.

"That's right. But...if a good person is adopted, it's not impossible to try to cultivate him into a kind-hearted person...well... Let's talk about this, think about other things first."

Speaking, Li Ziqian wrote a few more strokes on the pen and paper from Mo Nanbei, and then he continued,

"Then the next important thing is the prophecy. God and the devil will appear on the same day, and then someone finds the prodigy, but the prodigy later grows crooked."

"Well... the story frame came out, and then where is the cool point you set?"

Because Li Ziqian is writing the book, although Mo Nanbei can help to think about something, in the end the overall story is actually conceived by Li Ziqian alone.

If you want to help, you can only help Li Ziqian to conceive the plot in terms of framework, character design, and the most basic way of writing, with the most basic way of asking questions.

In fact, if you are just writing the book by yourself, these questions are completely self-answering.

Now when I write and conceive my own book, I usually ask Li Ziqian about my own story. I have to say that it is actually a kind of fun in a sense.

"The cool thing should be that the protagonist watched the Buddha turn into a demon step by step, and the protagonist showed the strength that he did not show, and pretended to be a force. After all, in the eyes of the protagonist's teammates, he is a handsome, good-looking person. A newcomer, isn't it?"

Li Ziqian thought for a while and replied to Mo Nanbei.

"Then logically, it should be a dual perspective.

The protagonist is the Buddha's perspective, while the teammates are the devil's perspective.

In the end, when the Buddha and Demon switched, he ate the eminent monk alone... No, you can't eat it alone. If you eat it alone, the demon I spent so long in shaping would be completely useless...

It would be better to directly create the image of an eminent monk, and the subsequent reversal effect would be completely meaningless. "

Li Ziqian said, and he denied some of the previous assumptions on his own.

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