Nomenclature of Night
Chapter 10: .8 Modify progress
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Today's revision progress is chapter 729-743.
There are still a lot of revisions today.
The first modification of is that in the plot of Qingchen climbing Mount Everest, he held back the masters of the kingdom and the future organization, so that Kunlun and the Parent Association attacked each other's base camp.
But in the original text, Qingchen's plan was not clear, it seemed more like a makeshift.
In the new revision, Qingchen and Boss Zheng's plan is more clear, which also makes his behavior on Mount Everest more reasonable.
The second modification is to repair the overall battle link. Many of the plots in this episode are explained too much, but instead make the battle look uninteresting, so it is simplified.
The third is to modify the life and death level this time, and ski on Mount Everest.
In the original text, after Qingchen fought with King's stand-in Arthur and Kashima Li Yunze, he used a few paragraphs to abbreviate the life and death, or even basically did not write it.
Therefore, in this revision, chapter 743 was rewritten, and the content of this life and death was completely deleted. After the battle, Qingchen did not continue to live and die.
Originally, he needed to complete the life and death test this time and return to the inner world to face Chen Yu.
But this time, Dayu finally admitted that he is Qingchen's teammate, so Qingchen doesn't need to worry, probably he has perfected the line between Daya and Qingchen.
In the follow-up plot, although Qingchen did not complete the life-and-death stage this time, it had little impact on the main line, because he did not fight Chen Yu after the crossing, but used the chemical reaction between Shroud and Dayu to destroy Chen's troops. pierced.
Then directly explore the underground base of Tinder's bionic body, and Qingchen didn't have a chance to take action.
Then, if this life-and-death is concerned, I will put it on tomorrow, Qingchen will complete it in the inner world this time, and the most important thing is to bring Chen Jiazhang, a decadent knight, together.
When Qingchen met Chen Jiazhang before, he saw his uncle borrowing wine to relieve his sorrow and decadence, but he didn't do anything, which was very inappropriate.
Qingchen will take his uncle to go through life and death again, and knights should have the ability to influence and inspire others.
Moreover, it is inappropriate to briefly write a life-and-death test, so I will mainly revise this point tomorrow, and I will inform you about the specific revision in the revision progress.
Well, that's all for today.
See you all tomorrow!
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