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“Huh? Perennially ranked first in the whole grade. ”

Nakano Yotsuba’s innocent eyes widened, and his face was full of incredulity.

Before transferring to Hidechiin Academy, the five sisters learned some news related to it, of course, the news they knew was very common, such as how powerful the president of the Hidechiin Gakuin Student Council was, etc., even so, they also knew how difficult it was to be the first place in the whole grade in the genius-filled Hidechiin Gakuen.

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After separating from the five Nakano sisters, Silver Miyuki took Shiina Mahaku and prepared to return to their home.

The streets are full of people, and cars are constantly flowing on the road.

On the way home, he found nothing, as if he had truly become an ordinary person, just like them to return home.

Around 6:40 p.m., it was getting dark.

Silver Miyuki returned to his ordinary but warm house with Shiina Mahaku, and he gently opened the door.

“I’m back.”

“Brother, Zhenbai, why are you two so late today?”

Silver Miyuki and Shiina Mahaku, who had just returned home, were seriously reprimanded by Bai Ginkei.

Of course, this rebuke is mainly aimed at Silver Goyuki, Shiina Mahaku is only incidental, after such a long time of getting along, Bai Yin Kei naturally knows what kind of character Shiina Mahaku is, so this time the culprit of the two who went home at night is definitely her dear brother Shiina Goyuki.

“I’m just doing my duty as student council president to help today’s new transfer students with their homework.”

In the face of Bai Yingui’s rebuke, Bai Yin Yuxing said righteously.

“Is it? I remember you didn’t seem to be so enthusiastic before. ”

Bai Yingui looked at Bai Yin Yuxing Dao suspiciously.

“You actually doubt your dear brother like this!”

Bai Yin Yuxing covered his chest and looked at Bai Yin Kei with a hurt expression.

And Bai Yingui ignored the funny Bai Yin Yuxing with an indifferent face, directly passed him, and pulled Shiina Mahaku, who was watching the friendly interaction between the two brothers and sisters on the side, to say, whispering between girls.

“It’s really an uncute sister, I don’t know how to feel sorry for my dear brother.”

Seeing that Bai Yingui completely ignored him, Bai Yin Yuyuki sighed softly, and then walked towards the kitchen, ready to make a delicious evening meal to comfort and comfort his wounded heart.

After dinner, the three of them watched TV in the living room for a while, each took a bath, and then returned to their own bedroom.

Not long after returning to his bedroom on the second floor, Yuki felt Shiina Mahaku about to break into his bedroom.

Shiina Mahaku walked in slowly without knocking on the door and with his consent.

“Zhenbai, is there something wrong?”

Bai Yin Miyuki asked Shiina Mahaku who walked in with a puzzled look.

“Comics.”

Shiina Mahaku replied without any expression on his face.

Looking at the stack of comic manuscripts printed out in her hand, Bai Yin Yuxing remembered that he had promised her to teach her to draw interesting comics today in order to let Mahaku rest early yesterday.

“Zhenbai, you sit down first, I’ll look at the comics you draw.”

Shiina Mahaku nodded his cute little head, walked to Silver Miyuki, and handed him the drawing in his hand.

Bai Yin Miyuki took the drawing from Shiina Mahaku and carefully flipped through it.

His first impression when he saw the manga drawn by Shiina Mahaku was amazing, and yes, the first sight was amazing, but this amazement was not the manga itself, but the characters and scenes in the manga.

Let’s just say that every piece of Shiina Mahaku’s painting can be regarded as a work of art.

Seeing these lifelike paintings, Bai Yin Yuxing truly realized that this natural girl in front of him was a world-class genius painter.

But the shortcomings are also extremely obvious, that is, it is about the plot.

This manga drawn by Shiina Mahaku is a youth love theme, and generally there are many sub-categories of comics with this theme, such as pure love, love triangle, harem shura, love comedy, etc., and the plot is even more colorful.

However, the manga drawn by Shiina Mahaku is not any of the above, and the plot is even more monotonous, so that Silver Goyuki has no desire to read it at all.

The plot of the manga drawn by Mahaku is probably that the boy owner met by chance, fell in love at first sight, and then got together.

You read it right, that is, men and women are directly together after seeing loyalty, there are no twists and turns in the middle, there is no foreshadowing, and there is no male and female two, and if you use one sentence to describe the feelings of Baiyin Yuxing now, it is boring and has no highlights.

Although Shiina Mahaku’s drawing style is definitely many times more than the top manga artist in the manga industry, as a traverser who has read countless manga, Silver Miyuki deeply understands that the art style is not the most important thing in the field of manga, the most important thing is the novel and interesting plot.

One-punch man is a representative work with novel themes and interesting plots, and a general painting style.

Putting down the drawing, Silver Miyuki asked Shiina Mahaku, “Mahaku, why do you want to draw manga?”

“I want to make it more interesting.”

Shiina Mahaku said without hesitation.

“Want to draw more interesting? No wonder comics were chosen. ”

Bai Yin Yuxing touched his chin and nodded somewhat clearly.

“Zhenbai, then I’ll say it bluntly.”

“Your painting style is indeed very good, but the shortcomings are also very obvious, and the plot setting is too monotonous, so that readers will not have any desire to watch it.”

“But this is normal, after all, you have been painting oil paintings before, and you don’t have any rich experience, and it is natural that the plot is too monotonous.”

Looking at Shiina Mahaku’s eyes that were as pure as white paper, Bai Yin Yuyuki said softly.

“Mahaku, do you know what is the most important thing about manga?”

As soon as the words changed, Silver Miyuki asked Shiina Mahaku.

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