Otsutsuki In The Celestial Realm

My new editor is editing the old chapters of this novel, yesterday he edited chapter 3.

If possible read chapter 3 and tell me if the grammar has improved. Enjoy reading.

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"Of course we have to make a bigger room, after all, my mother and I will sleep with you from now on."

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"HAAA?!"

Even Haruka was surprised to hear what Miyuki said.

"NEVER! I will never allow that!" A voice echoed through the room.

Everyone looks in their direction, they are shocked by the appearance of Kaguya and Tsukuyomi who had a helpless smile next to her.

Kaguya who used to be a cute 90 CM tall child grew to 1.70 CM tall. Kaguya's body has grown to the size of an a.d.u.l.t and has become curvy, she now has large b.r.e.a.s.ts that threaten to come out of her white kimono, a large toned a.s.s that not even the kimono can hide.

She is wearing a white kimono with long white hair that unlike before was now on her waist, her hair has grown long that it touches the ground, on Kaguya's head there were a two big white horns. Kaguya's appearance now gives her a noble and m.a.t.u.r.e image.

"Kaguya!?" Akemi and Naomi shout in unison.

"Yeah? It's me, what's the problem?" Kaguya asks by tilting her head in confusion.

"Honey, look in the mirror." Tsukuyomi says softly while smiling fondly at her.

Kaguya smiles when she hears Tsukuyomi calling her affectionately and does what he asks, she uses her Chakra and makes a mirror in front of her.

"That's-!" Kaguya can't pronounce words when she looks at her image reflecting in the mirror. - This looks a lot like my old appearance before I died, but I don't remember my horns being that white. - She thinks internally while posing several times in the mirror.

Naomi who was no longer enduring the feeling of worry jumps in Tsukuyomi's direction and embraces him. Tsukuyomi got surprised, but soon he returns his mother's hug harder and said, "I'm back."

Naomi who heard Tsukuyomi's voice can no longer hold her feelings and starts crying in his c.h.e.s.t.

"!" Hearing the sudden cry, everyone looks in Naomi's direction in understanding, after all, although Haruka says Tsukuyomi was fine, a mother can't help but to worry.

Akemi can't stand it either and hugs her daughter while little tears start coming out of her eyes. Kaguya also got surprised, but soon she smiles lovingly and hugs her mother back. - So this is what having a family is, Huh? It's not bad... - She thinks.

Miyuki just watches with a little smile on her stoic face, but Haruka knows very well that she was holding herself not to hug Tsukuyomi.

Haruka sighs and says, "Go on, he's your family too."

Listening to Haruka's words of encouragement. Miyuki stops hesitating and jumps into Tsukuyomi's c.h.e.s.t and hugs him tightly.

Tsukuyomi is surprised that even Miyuki hugs him too, but he's not dense, he knows very well that she likes him even though he doesn't know why she likes him, but he won't deny her feelings so he says lovingly in an apologetic tone while stroking Naomi and Miyuki's hair: "I'm back and I'm sorry... I'm sorry to make you worry, Miyuki."

Akemi who was also worried about Tsukuyomi takes her daughter by her arms and uses her Chakra to get close to Tsukuyomi and also hugs him. Soon a family hug is seen by Haruka.

Realizing that the atmosphere was turning pink, Haruka sighs and tries to leave the room, after all, she doesn't want to participate in it, but a voice stops her: "Haruka Otsutsuki, thank you so much for looking after me. Even though I was unconscious, I still felt your presence comforting me." Tsukuyomi says to her.

"!" Hearing Tsukuyomi's words, all the girls look in Haruka's direction with a shocked expression as if they didn't believe his words, but when they see Haruka's face a little red, they instantly believe his words.

"Humpf!" Haruka snorts towards Tsukuyomi and starts walking towards the exit, but she stops walking when she feels her power grow and something soft kissing her cheeks.

"I bless you, I hope I can count on you now, Haruka." Tsukuyomi says as he suddenly appeared next to Haruka while watching a moon tattoo appear on Haruka's pale face.

Haruka realizing that he had just a done, look at Tsukuyomi with a bright red face while trying to form coherent words. "You-! You-!"

"?" Tsukuyomi looks confused at her, he looks in the direction of the girls and just sees them shaking their heads with an expression that said 'can't be helped.

"Ara, Ara. Welcome to the group, Haruka." Naomi says smiling while wiping her eyes from the sobbing.

"!" Haruka turns totally red listening to Naomi's words, she looks in the direction of Tsukuyomi with a crying face and says: "I will not marry you! Baka!"

* BAAAAM! * Haruka runs towards the exit and when she goes out into the hallway she closes the door very hard.

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Everyone was so shocked to see Haruka the Otsutsuki clan elder acting like a little girl in front of everyone in the room did not know how to react, leaving the room in an awkward silence.

* Cough! Cough! Cough! * Naomi coughs to dispel the awkward atmosphere and says. "That was unexpected..."

"Yes..." They all say it at the same time.

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Another awkward silence comes down in the room. It can't be helped, to see the clan elder acting like a girl was too shocking even for them who live with her for twelve years, suddenly a white fox with ten tails and a white rabbit with ten tails appears and starts playing with each other.

Seeing the fox and rabbit Miyuki asks, "Now that I think about it, you never told us their names, right?"

Kaguya and Tsukuyomi who was now standing next to the girls that being hugged again nodded in agreement. Tsukuyomi starts using his divine energy mixed with the Chakra to organize the room and make another King Size bed in which he lies together with the girls who don't want to leave his side.

"My rabbit's name is Shiro-Hime and yours, Tsukuyomi?" Kaguya says as she takes comfort in the arms of Tsukuyomi who was lying in King Size bed.

"My fox's name is [email protected]#%@"

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Edited By: TornHeart

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