Pirates: One Way All the Way

In the middle of the night, open a can of soda, listen to a song, I'll just chat casually.

Two volumes have been completed, with more than forty chapters.

From what you can see here, it is estimated that my story is more or less attractive to you, so I will find some time to chat with you.

In fact, the earliest chapters of this book were written more than a year ago. Those who are more familiar with Xingyao or Qiucheng may all know this. They know that I have been procrastinating and writing it intermittently for more than a year.

When I first wrote this book, I didn't plan to upload it, I just planned to treat it as a piece of my memory and try to cherish it.

Since college, I have tried a lot, such as traveling all over China and eating snacks, such as trying to be the president of the student union, such as being an instructor, such as doing a charity, such as learning photography, such as learning dubbing, such as learning Tea ceremony, such as learning to be a barista, another example... writing a novel of your own.

Why did you upload it later?

Well, maybe it's because I'm not in good shape recently, and I'm more confused after the new year, especially with a lot of questions about careers, take a six-day break and get to know it......One day, I accidentally saw myself writing on and off for a year. There are many stories, more than 300,000 words are thrown into Word, so, with a slap on the head, upload it outrageously......

So I was already ready to hit the street. I just wanted to send it out to adjust my mood and divert my attention, so I didn’t tell anyone, and I didn’t care how bad my grades were, I just posted it and changed the story. The time has come to stand short.

It feels good to be recognized by others, so I am more attentive, and I have carefully considered the plot, but my ability is still limited.

As for the book itself.

It is undeniable that in addition to feelings, I choose to write fangirls because I don't trust my ability to structure the world, so I hope it's easier.

However, doujin is also a secondary creation, and it also has its own content, not to mention the leap-forward transformation from animation to text, which is bound to have a huge impact on the expression of the story.

It's like a movie adaptation of a novel.

Novels need to be logical. For a novel that doesn't make sense of logic, there is a 90% chance that it will be sprayed out of Tian Mi Gong. But if you put too much emphasis on logic, it is still the pirate in my heart that I have been chasing for more than ten years. ?

Garp was cut down with an axe by Colonel Monka, the Axe King, and the sky was full of blood. I don't think I can write it.

But if it's too realistic, then why should I write this novel?

For the heat?

For a simpler worldview structure?

Then why didn't I write about Hokage? !

In my opinion, the world of pirates is somewhat two-dimensional and somewhat inexplicable.

Although I couldn't read the book Fire Dragon due to some reasons, the beginning of this book really made me feel as if I had seen a side story drawn by Oda.

I think I can't do it.

I have been in the online literature circle for many years. When I read a novel, my first reaction is to ask why, so my story should be more realistic on the basis of the second dimension.

So I thought, how to balance the second dimension and reality?

After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to choose "emotion" and "growth" as the balance beam on the other side of the scale.

Pirates are passionate and passionate, and strong feelings are the main focus of pirates, so I start with feelings, family, friendship, and love...

The more important element is growth.

When Moza came to this world, his three views were influenced or even recast, so he was also growing up and gradually adapting to this world.

In my plan, each volume corresponds to Moza's state of mind at different times, and he will grow a little after each volume.

This is the label of this book, the gradual growth, strong emotions, and the second dimension of the wind.

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To be honest, I haven’t actually written much recently. I only wrote less than 100,000 words in 27 days after publishing the book, of which tens of thousands of words were still revised plots. As a result, there are fewer and fewer manuscripts saved. ....

In fact, I am very grateful for everyone's support, such as helping me break the book review area *um*, and help me break the fan list, the inappropriate pirate's Hokage is not a good hunter children's shoes, nine-headed evil **** children's shoes, God's killing angel children's shoes , Red-Eyed Dragon Children's Shoes........(I don't have to type one by one, it's so tiring to type, 嘤嘤嘤) Of course, there are also our Qiucheng and Xingyao children's shoes~

I would also like to thank the instant ~ Qianzhuan Samsara and these two friends who are not learning from each other. In the midst of the urging, someone finally gave me an opinion!

The newcomer, in fact, has avoided the minefield as much as possible, but there are still places that cannot be taken care of, so I need everyone to give me opinions~

Of course, it's not an excuse for newcomers to shirk their own problems, and there is indeed a lot of lack of writing skills.

In the future, there may be no way to explain them one by one, but now there are fewer people and fewer problems, so let's explain a wave~

In chapter thirty-seven, Shanna Tongxue said: The plot layout of this section is too sloppy, the heroine appears abruptly, the protagonist wakes up and the description is too two-dimensional, and the plot is too abrupt, what is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine? host. .

In the same chapter thirty-seven, this is not the school children's shoes said: just pay attention to the villain's IQ and rationality, I am talking about the rationality of people's reactions.

Chapter 41, Shanna Children's Shoes said: The beginning is actually very good, mainly because the desert is written inexplicably, the inexplicable heroine has a plot, you can pretend to be tender, but the psychology is not like a person who has lived for two lives. People, if you put them together, they must be in their thirties, but they look childish like a teenager. . Still not enough

The first question...

To tell the truth, Ben Dong is also very embarrassed. It was not written like this in the original manuscript, but after publishing the book, Ben Dong felt that it was so easy for Mosa to get through the difficulties, which was a bit anticlimactic, so he arranged a large wave of unexpected events for him. encounter.

There is a feeling of rampage, briefly breaking into the outside world.

I went back and looked at it, uh, it does look a little awkward. . .

Besides, at the end of the first volume, Ben Dong deliberately explained the information of the heroine because he was afraid that everyone would think Krista was the heroine...

In the novel of the starting point, the heroine is simply a high-voltage line all over the minefield. . . . .

The core of the second volume is actually when Moza killed for the first time, the ability to control his life and death made him lost. After the wanton killing, he couldn't bear the shock. He fell into a coma, and then in Keli Under the influence of Sita, the inner process was strengthened.

This is when he left Zefa and Luna's arms for protection, and left the strong concentration camp of Marin Fando. After entering the novice village for the first time, this sudden and unpredictable mentality imbalance after breaking free from restraint and protection with the adjustment process.

In the previous life, Mosa was running around for life, except for accidents and illnesses, there was no topic related to life.

In this world, life is neither fragile nor cheap.

Possessing the right and ability to deprive others of life, this is the field that Mosa has set foot on for the first time in the past and present.

Of course, the problem of insufficient writing power is very pertinent. It is also because of this reason that my writing in this volume has not achieved the expected effect. I am also improving a little bit in this regard. See more, think more, practice more.

The second question.

The rationality of people's reactions, this Ben Dong is a bit confused, mainly because when Ben Dong conceived, he would refer to the character and encounter that Ben Dong set for the character to set the reaction. In Ben Dong's view, it is reasonable, but carefully. After thinking about it, Ben Dong remembered that Ben Dong's performance and description in the text did not necessarily allow everyone to understand what Ben Dong thought.

The third question?

This Benton needs to clarify, in the setting, Moza's character is indeed like this...

To put it simply, pretend to be cute until you become cute. . . .

The following is my personal opinion.

In my opinion, human growth is never purely the accumulation of time.

People often say that UU reading www. uukanshu.com When you reach that age, you will find that you suddenly understand what you used to see flowers in the fog.

Conversely, it can also be said that before reaching that age, after all, it seems that I don't understand.

In fact, after reading online articles for so many years, especially the rebirth articles and the soul wear in the time-travel articles, some questions often arise:

After more than 20 years of time travel, and 20 years after time travel, how can someone who is almost forty years old still behave like a twenty-year-old person?

Personally, I don't think it's like this. Let me give you a chestnut.

If you cross three times, the first 20 years old, the first time you live from a young age to 20 years old, and the second time you live from a young age to 20 years old, how old should you be when you cross the third time?

I think at least not 20+20+20=60 years old.

Or even on the contrary, I think maybe around thirty years old.

Of course, this, like a rigid body, is the product of a purely ideal state.

But in other words, Mosa had just left the school for two years in his previous life. He was about 24 years old, and he was 4 years old in this life.

I don't think Mosa will have the mental age he had when he was thirty.

On the contrary, I think that under the influence of such a young life environment and the impact of a completely different world outlook, outlook on life and values, his mental age should have become younger.

The term "juvenile" is used quite rightly. In my assumption, Mosa should be at the psychological age of 16 to 18 teenagers.

For this strange world, he is far from mature enough.

I have written so much, and I am really grateful for your support and for the questions you have raised. I am not afraid of discovering problems. Only when problems are discovered can we hope to correct them.

thank you all.

(Actually, I still want to write, but I'm going to bed, I'm too sleepy...)