Reborn In Tokyo After Picking Up Sayu Who Ran Away From Home

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   Explain the situation:

  I try my best to pursue a reasonable transition of the plot and prevent the characters from being OOC.

  Is it difficult for Sayu to restore Tokyo's memory?

   It's not difficult. I can even explain it in one sentence, telling you directly that she has recovered her memory, and I have also briefly mentioned the cause and effect.

  —Is this all right? (It would be too easy for me to write like this)

   There is a big brother who feels uncomfortable, so there is no need to read it.

  I can consider your reasonable suggestions, and I can change the plot if I have a good idea, but I really have nothing to say about this.

  Everyone has read pirated books, but please respect others a little bit and don’t bring rhythm in the original one, please?

Thank you.

   Let’s talk about the male lead.

   Some readers feel that he is getting worse and worse. The reason is that I only think of two directions.

  1. The male protagonist remains indifferent and closed. I have been writing about career development and weakening the plots of other female characters.

  2. Let him be a little scumbag, keep interacting with female characters, and reduce the depressing atmosphere.

   As for whether the male protagonist is scumbag or not, judge for yourself.

  At least I didn’t let him cheat other people’s feelings, it’s always been everyone’s free choice.

  Finally, there are contradictions and positions among the female characters.

  This is a realistic novel, how can others let you open the harem safely?

  If Hui and Shiyu don't resist, then they are not themselves.

   Still the same sentence, if you have good suggestions, you are welcome to give them. I can change the plot if what you say is good, otherwise I will write according to my own.

  To be honest, at first I thought writing a million words would be enough, but I ended up writing more and more.

   Now, I just feel pain.

  I really didn't want to force money (besides, there is no money for this achievement), I want to finish it more than anyone else.

   There are two kinds of endings:

  1. Successful completion.

  2. Unfinished.

   I'm really sorry if I disappointed you.

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  (end of this chapter)