People are writing novels in Journey to the West, and saints have come to urge them to update!

Lingtai square inch mountain, in the middle.

In the simple and elegant study room, a big black dog drooped its eyelids listlessly, looking at the two people in the room from time to time.

I saw Yunxiao holding a brush, his face was almost full of seriousness, all his attention was on the tip of the brush, and only the lines of words were in his mind.

Since becoming a god, she is still so dedicated to doing one thing.

On the contrary, Mu Chen, who was reading a book, had a trace of surprise and astonishment in his eyes.

"Good guy, isn't this the Journey to the West version of "Legend of the White Snake"?"

He muttered in his mouth, and a deep sense of curiosity arose in his heart. He did not expect that the first water-testing work written by the famous Empress Yunxiao was actually this folk love story.

[One hundred years of cultivation can cross the same boat, and one thousand years of cultivation can make people sleep together]

【After saving the White Snake, the down-and-out scholar spent a hundred years in the human world and entered several reincarnations. Only then did he wait for the person in his heart on the West Lake. 】

【"Girl, it's raining so hard, why did you come here alone?" The scholar stood on the canopy and curiously asked the girl in white beside him. 】

[White Snake glanced at him with a smile, even after several reincarnations, she recognized him at a glance...]

After writing this, Yun Xiao suddenly frowned, as if he had encountered a problem and stopped writing.

"Teacher, I have clearly invested the greatest emotion and substituted myself into the story. Why do I still feel that the story is not real enough?"

Just now, she found that she suddenly had difficulty writing while writing, and she clearly substituted into the story, but she quickly separated from the story.

If the author himself cannot be involved in the story, how can the reader be involved?

In desperation, she could only turn to her teacher Muchen for help.

Mu Chen smiled lightly, and said in a calm manner: "You have indeed been substituted into the story, but only the protagonist White Snake was substituted."

"As the creator of the story, it's good to write it into the story, but you should also know that the characters in your writing are not only white snakes!"

Speaking of this, Mu Chen carried his hands on his back, looking like a master, and continued:

"Characters are the essence of a story. Whether readers can resonate with a story depends to a large extent on whether the characters you create are complete and real."

"In order to create real characters, the writer needs to constantly substitute various characters in the story, integrate the characters themselves from the perspective of God, and figure out the emotional changes in the characters' hearts. Even a trivial supporting role must not be ignored. .”

He paused, gave Yun Xiao some time to digest, and then continued:

"For example, in the plot you wrote, you only included the white snake, but ignored the scholar."

"In my opinion, this scholar is the portrayal of most literati in the world. They are well-educated, but sometimes they are a little pedantic and cowardly. But is this kind of person, who will take the initiative to strike up a conversation with the white snake?"

"This is obviously not in line with the character of the character. He shouldn't have done this, but he did it. Naturally, it will give people an unreal feeling."

After the words fell, Yun Xiao was stunned for a while, and then his eyes suddenly became sharp.

No wonder, it turned out to be like this!

The teacher is really amazing!

But then, she fell into melancholy again.

"But if the scholar doesn't strike up a conversation, how can they meet in West Lake?"

She sighed, she felt that this book was too difficult to write!

At this moment, Mu Chen smiled and said:

"There are many ways to meet, it depends on how you arrange it. Of course, although it is not a scholar's character to strike up a conversation, what if he is out of kindness to help rather than strike up a conversation?"

As he spoke, he stopped, no longer speaking, but looked at Yun Xiao with a smile.

When Yunxiao heard the words, he suddenly realized and was overjoyed. He quickly erased the paragraph he wrote just now with magic power, thought for a moment, and wrote instead:

[The drizzle was continuous, and the scholar in the canopy of the boat was hiding from the rain. He happened to see the solitary figure on the broken bridge that was drenched in the rain. Umbrella."]

【White Snake stared blankly at the scholar who handed her an umbrella, but she was extremely excited. After searching for a hundred years, she finally found him. 】

【But before she could speak, the scholar brought the umbrella and left in a hurry...】

"Teacher, writing like this is really much smoother!"

Yun Xiao cheered in surprise, and looked at Mu Chen with a hint of admiration.

This is the first time for her to try to write a novel. Although she doesn't understand some things very well, she has fallen in love with novels unknowingly.

For her, novels are a brand new world, in which all kinds of love and hatred are intertwined, and she can be like a creator god, creating stories one after another and arranging the fate of the characters in the novel.

And these all come from Mu Chen's teachings!

[After returning to Qingfeng Cave, White Snake immediately told his good sister Xiaoqing about the West Lake, and they decided to go down to earth to find the scholar, firstly to return the umbrella, and secondly to repay their kindness...]

After mastering the skills of character setting, Yunxiao wrote more and more freely, and felt that he had completely entered the world of the book, sometimes playing the role of a white snake, sometimes becoming Xiaoqing, and sometimes turning into a scholar, experiencing the warmth and coldness of the world.

In her writing book, several talents rose from her dantian, nourishing her body, and repairing her various hidden diseases over the years.

As the story progresses, more and more talents are born within her.

"Ding! Your disciple Yun Xiao has gained talent and successfully entered the master's school. As her master, you can choose a magical power to synchronize with her!"

The system's cold voice sounded, and the corner of Mu Chen's mouth curled into a smile.

As expected of Empress Yunxiao, she got into the door so quickly, thinking that when the monkey got started, she had laid the foundation for several months!

There was a moment of feeling in his heart, and then fell into hesitation.

According to the system, he can choose an ability to synchronize with his disciples. At the beginning, the ability he synchronized with Sun Wukong was "Creation of the Void", so what ability should he synchronize with Yunxiao, the second disciple?

Just as he was thinking.

"Want Wang."

Di Ting, the big black dog in the yard, barked suddenly.

Mu Chen followed the sound and saw Yang Jian, Li Jing and others walking in, supporting each other.

&nby Angry, didn't Yang Jian follow Wukong to Tianting to open a bookstore? "

He was a little curious, so he put aside the matter of synchronization ability for now, seeing that Yunxiao was still creating, he walked out by himself.

"Two, what are you?"

As soon as he finished speaking, Yang Jian said: "Senior, it's not good, brother Wukong was captured by the Buddhist sect!"

"what?"

Mu Chen's complexion changed drastically, turning livid all of a sudden.

The Buddhist sect is so courageous, they have not taught them a lesson about the Ksitigarbha Bodhisattva, how long has passed, and they come to provoke themselves again!

Could it be that their entire Buddhist sect wants to go to the island to experience it?

He took a deep breath, and subconsciously wanted to hit Lingshan to save people, but just as he took a step, he suddenly thought of something, and took it back in embarrassment.

Nima, this time the system didn't give the 'Quasi-Saint Cultivation Experience Card'!

How did this hit Lingshan?

"System, my apprentice was arrested again, why don't you say anything?"

He summoned the system in his mind.

"Sorry, I don't understand what you're talking about."

"Then I'll just say it straight, I'm going to Lingshan to save people, so hurry up and give me the quasi-sage cultivation base."

"Sorry, it's beyond the capabilities of the system, please don't dream."

"..."

Mu Chen was speechless, and then he remembered that the current system is just a consciousness, and that smarter and more humane 'system' is still suppressing the shrine in the Palace of Heaven and Earth Literature!

The situation is urgent, what should I do?