The One Who Collects

This chapter is to say that I will be restarting the book. The book is fun and all and it really an interesting story for me but as I was reading through all twenty chapters, I saw many flaws in the book and I am ashamed of myself. The first chapter is supposed to make the best impression to draw readers in and I did a bad job at that.

The characters development is the best thing I ever did in this story and when I restart the book, I feel like I can do better than it is now. There are some plot holes in the book that I think some people didn't notice but I did.

The timeline is messed up too. Some of you guys may not have noticed this but I did. This is Adan statue as of chapter 7...

{

Name: Adan

PL: 293 [ Physical: 144 | Galdura: 149{{Fire-bending: 149(Pro{peak})}]

Abilities: Stealing(MAX), Pain tolerance(83/100), Manipulation(87/100), silent movement(MAX), Planning(42/100), Hallucination resistance(MAX){Effect is reduced greatly}

Age: 48 Years

Soul Statue: N/A

Body Statue: Exhausted{need sleep}, Hungry{Need food}

}

And this was his statue after 10 years of training in chapter 11.

{

Name: Adan

PL: 1286 [Physical: 774{Body: 327}{Martial art: 447} | Galdura: 512{{Fire-bending: 512(Master)}]

Abilities: Stealing(MAX), Pain tolerance(93/100), Manipulation(89/100), silent movement(MAX), Planning(57/100), Hallucination resistance(MAX){Effect is reduced greatly}

Age: 53 Years

Soul Statue: N/A

Body Statue: N/A

}

...

..

.

Do you see what I did wrong? Here is another example... This is Adam statue from chapter 7...

{

Name: Adam

PL: 390 [ Physical: 100(Reward not added) | Galdura: 290{Earth-bending: 70(Trainee)}, {Air-bending: 80(Trainee)}, {Water-bending: 57(Trainee)}, {Fire-bending: 73(Trainee)}]

Abilities: Researching(MAX), Medicine(MAX), Stealing(87/100) Pain tolerance(80/100), Hallucination resistance(MAX){Effect is reduced greatly}

Age: 1,917,863 Years(15 Years)

AMT: 495 years

Soul Statue: N/A

Body Statue: Exhausted{sleep}

Point: N/A (Reward not added)

}

And this is his statue after 10 years of training in chapter 11.

{

Name: Adam

PL: 3046 [ Physical: 1123 {Body:301}{Martial art: 822} | Galdura: 1923{Earth-bending: 488(Master}{Air-bending: 517(Master)}{Water-bending: 432(Master)}{Fire-bending: 486(Master)}]

Abilities: Researching(MAX), Medicine(MAX), Stealing(87/100) Pain tolerance(84/100), Hallucination resistance(MAX){Effect is reduced greatly}, Cooking(MAX)

Age: 1,917,868 Years(20 Years)

AMT: 490 years

Soul Statue: N/A

Body Statue: N/A

Point: 198,159

}

If you spot what wrong with it tell me in the comment. I will be restarting the book and be deleting all chapters tomorrow. Somethings will stay the same but some character's names will be changed and other things that I think are good for the book.

Sorry for people who liked this book BUT I HAVE to RESTART the BOOK!!!