The Unrighteous God In Marvel

About several descriptions that seem abrupt and inexplicable.

There is also the issue of the establishment of widow sisters.

In fact, the several appearances of Gu Yi, Time Gem, Mephisto, and Widow Sister are actually one thing. That is a foreshadowing throughout the whole text.

But my goal does not seem to be achieved.

If you don’t have enough writing skills, you still want to play flower life. This is the end! (T^T)

I want to express [Widow Sister has obvious and inexplicable differences between Lyon and others] [Widow Sister seems to be familiar with Lyon, which should be unfamiliar]. Then, through these two points to prove one other thing, that is, the foreshadowing.

It's a mess. Sparsely. Didn't do it at all. It was a terrible failure.

Looking back now, the former should do more horizontal comparisons at the same time. I'm afraid you think I am too watery to write. So some book friends think that the widow sister has problems. This is my question.

The writing is not good, I am working hard.

The latter seems to be more paving, even if it looks more watery. I should be a little anxious. So it was abrupt.

Amend the outline today.

In the future, this kind of flower work will be reduced as much as possible...

Strive to understand what you can write and understand first, and then study other things (T^T)

Today, try to ensure that 8000 words.