The Unwanted Princess

This is just to inform you about the development and what I have planned for this story.

(I advise not to skip the story information, just to have better insight about the story) ( And to prevent or clarify any misunderstandings about the story so far )

(This is not a story chapter)

[Slight spoilers to some portions of the story] [ Spoilers do not contain what will happen in the story, just what to expect in the story ]

So far I've been publishing chapter's that each hold their own pieces of the story. What I want to do is have the story chapters consist of one whole story with the same plot.

There will be more adventures, drama, fights, romance, and of course blood and gore.

If anyone is concerned about this and I'm sure a lot of people will be and are, Inanna's body is currently 13 years old in the story so far, yet Ivery who inhabits her body is 16 years old, this story is mainly historical, so my point means, in past times it was common and even normalized that girls 13 and even younger than that were able to be engaged and married or in a relationship. Usually if they came from a noble or royal households, this was the case.

I apologize if anyone dislikes romanticizing young teenagers, you can always drop the story if you don't feel comfortable reading about Ivery and Luther kissing at the ages of 13 and 15, because they'll be doing more of that before any changes are made.

Luther is currently 15 years old, two years older than Inanna but Ivery who possesses Inanna's body is one year older than Luther. Since Ivery took over Inanna's body, she's technically 13 again, but if anyone feels uncomfortable with the ages that are set, Ivery and Luther won't be 13 and 15 for long so you hopefully won't feel uncomfortable for too long.

I also want to address Luther's character, so...I created Luther to be a love and hate character or a character that you can like but also dislike at the same time. His actions will be appalling to most people and I'm fine with that because not many people are in for violence, but I'm not supportive for real world violence, my interests are exclusively fictional violence but depending on what type, because I'm not personally into domestic abuse, or child abuse nor do I support anything involving those types of things.

But I am a sucker for scary/bloody stories, movies, tv shows, etc. I want to use this story to express that interest of mine, unlike my other stories it's impossible to add gore or it would almost ruin the story and it's dynamic.

So I'm sorry if anyone hates the fact that Luther is a killer that takes p.l.e.a.s.u.r.e in killing etc, and I used many cliches when creating him, including his looks..

And please don't misunderstand why I made Luther '"Handsome", I don't want Luther to be envisioned as regular or normal person with an average appearance, when I had the story in mind I already had Luther's character set as well as his appearance.

Even if Luther had an average appearance, it wouldn't have changed anything within the story or it's progress regardless, because I am the author, creator, maker...so that makes me the absolute God of this story...if I will it, it shall happen c:

But I won't have him kill just anyone and everyone as the story progresses and this is technically a spoiler but...

Luther's behavior will eventually soften up as the story progresses, as he gets older, is rage and d.e.s.i.r.e to kill will be mostly directed to people who offend him or Ivery in some sort of way. I don't want to turn Luther into some sort of psycho killer maniac that people will definitely hate.

Luther is more than what the story paints him to be, he has a background and a deep past that the story will tell and explain.

But Luther's character will barely ever change so I apologize if anyone disproves of him.

Instead of writing our ML, Luther to be the cliche nice and extremely gentle prince that's nice to everyone and everything, why not give an antagonist prince the spotlight of being a ML instead? In my opinion having a antagonist male lead makes it more interesting and fits the horror genre of this story.

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As clarification for readers that don't understand the story, characters and the plot to far,

Luther is the one and only male lead and there is no other male lead or potential male lead, sorry to inform people that dislike Luther's character. I dislike harems and love triangles so there will be none of that.

At the start of the story how Ivery and Luther interact with each other is not love yet, it is pure and simple interest and curiosity, nothing too romantic blooms between them at that point.

Yes the interactions between them comes fast but that's how I want the story to be, so that's how it'll be, sorry if anyone disapproves of that :)

I don't and didn't want to drag the story out too much where it will be unbearable for the readers to keep anticipating the romance and it never comes, if I dragged the romance out the outcome will most likely be..

"Where's the romance?"

"Isn't this a historical romance genre?"

"The story has more horror than romance, why isn't it in the horror genre category?"

Etc.

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I try to make these characters as realistic as I possibly can, so I include all of the flaws, emotions and behaviors that humans have. Especially since the story starts off with young adolescents.

Some people will dislike Ivery's character so far because she makes haste and questionable decisions and gives into Luther so easily, or gives herself to the "psycho sociopath" that'll kill her. It's already established that he won't harm her, so that's nothing to worry about.

There's a reason for everything that happened so far, and if you read...you'll find out more and why.

So honestly, I don't recommend making any serious criticism reviews about the characters early on in the story, especially if you stop reading around chapter 1-10, which doesn't hold much character development or any at all.

Overall, criticism of the early and late story chapters is welcomed and appreciated and I will make adjustments depending on the constructive criticism that I receive.

But blatant hate and rudeness about the story does not help at all nor does discouragement towards the story, such replies or comments may be removed.

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About the overpowering I did with Ivery and Luther,

Since there isn't much strength development needed for the two of them, I decide to put in dangerous situations or a lot of drama just to give the characters a challenge and test out what they can and are capable of or will be capable of, rather it be a magical challenge or psychological challenge.

The characters will be drastically powered to where it may seem unserious at times but oh well.

And as for the genre's, this story will not include: Harem's, gender-bender, Tragedy, Sci-fi, Reverse Harems

This story's tags include: Strong female lead, Strong male lead, Overpowered female lead, Overpowered male lead, Violence, Royalty, Romance, Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Magic, Blood, Gore

This story is not a horror genre with romance it's a romance genre with horror.

I want this story to have meaning, and depth. Everything I have planned for this story will soon be implemented when I create more chapters.

I am working on this novel/story alone as I do with many of my other stories on different platforms, I have no proof readers, editors or anyone helping me with this story. I usually focus on having the chapter's posted faster rather than finding every single mistake I made, since I write over 1000+ words I usually don't catch every mistake and I tend overlook them, so grammar errors are bound to be found in some or most chapters. So I would appreciate any constructive criticism to help me improve the story, I also don't mind any recommendations that I could add into the story, like custom bonus chapters or new ideas for a chapter or new ideas for the story.

I don't mind negative feedback at all, so don't hold back! It let's me know what I've done incorrectly and fix them

This story is in fact nothing professional, I am still an inexperienced aspiring writer and I choose to write stories like this as practice and as a way to express my fictional fantasies that I have in my head. This story was something that just came to me and I have many more story ideas still trapped in my head that I don't mind sharing and writing some day.

I am always reading any comments I get! Even if I don't reply in time, or at all, just know that I've still read your comment and I deeply deeply appreciate them all. Leaving comments are very motivating for me to continue working on this story, it either let's me know that I'm doing something right or wrong.

If and when the time comes for it, I will add an additional genre if people will agree with it and would be interested in reading that kind of stuff..

Possible New Genre Hint: [Extremely M.a.t.u.r.e Content] [Specifically for Ivery & Luther]

If you're old enough...you'll understand what it means.

This genre will only be implemented into the story if people are completely certain they want to read that kind of material. So comments about the approval of it or disapproval will be necessary. I'll be sure to bring it back up later for confirmation.