The Villainous Cruz Family

Chapter -1 - Rewrite and clarification on world settings

This is a rewrite, the original has already been deleted. The general flow and feel of the story takes a whole different turn but falls more in line with the original intention I had for the characters and the plot of the story.

The general idea of 'The Villainous Cruz Family' previously known as 'Victoria's Garden' is that in this world, everyone has a superpower called an Ability. Each person only has one each but it's strength and usefulness is totally random and dependent on the individual. There exists conditions and fuel for each Ability, which are once again pretty random.

For example, two people have water abilities. Person A can make water from the air and manipulate it freely. If Person A uses his ability too much, he must sleep to refill his fuel. Person B can only control available water and cannot collect it from the air. However, Person B can control all liquids unlike Person A and once his fuel tank is empty, only has to consume sugar.

In such a world, there are those who abuse their powers for selfish and lawless purposes, they are called Villains. Those who stop them are Heroes.

Sidenote: Shameless plug but, please read my other completed story, Knight in Another World and leave a review.

Thank you!

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