The World Of Demons And Gods

Chapter 15 - Author's Thoughts! (1st)

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Author's thoughts: Our Mc is practically way too Op and easy to write which make things boring and really make things much less interesting. No hardsh.i.p.s, too much info dump, no development, plot armor is so thicker than my face, and this just early stages! He isn't even adventuring yet!

He is master of multiple martial arts that makes him already Op, his cultivation method is powerful that can be practically called a cheat code. Now we had Lightning powers and extremely top notch on top of that, his fire elements is still mysterious which means it is really powerful. there will be other two more powerups in the coming chapters. His elements are powerful too, But I decide that his gravitational element will take forever before he could acquire it to prevent being way too op because having gravity means being untouchable.

To remind all of you, this is just my first public novel, well, I did novels back then but this novel had made me preparing years ago. I know that there will be a f.u.c.k ton of plot holes in the future and errors, but I'll try to cover things up as we progress.

(by the way, English is not my first language so, it'll be difficult for me to write especially grammatical errors and... repetition .)

Everything seems much op and too many powerups at early stages of the novel which is now. But in the future, there will be extremely powerful enemies that had many inheritances like him, like the, foreshadow earlier, there are divine entities.

I want to make an emotional drama, hardsh.i.p.s and make our mc realize that he is just being a kid despite he is a grown-up man inside. I'd say he had been taken over by his childish fantasies.

He is also a mechanical engineer, in the future, I hope I can write something base on his profession. I actually want to make a kingdom building novel but it takes too much time as for I am only a high school student. I am deeply affected by RTW (release that witch) which drove me like "Hey, I can do this I have many ideas!"

But, focusing on his kingdom building is just far fetch (after all this is a fantasy, action and romance novel), I plan to continue to write this until I graduate college, and adding kingdom building in the novel will just make things unbalanced.

Honestly, kingdom building takes much time on doing research before writing, well If I want to write kingdom building I need to write real knowledge and facts. But for now, I want to focus on our Mc knowing the world, developing emotional trauma and introducing one more Mc (yeah, a girl yay!)

I badly want to make a good a character development but because of being an author we had many many ways where we choose the path of our mc and each path had a different ending and development.

Making Cyrus weaker is alright so that he had room to learn things on the hard way, as the matter of fact we are still on the prologue.

Also, as a high school student, I can still learn many things and I believe that my writing will improve as time goes by. Aaannnd, I read many novels, especially eastern ones because as an Asian, I like Asian novels more than the western one haha... I only read a western novel only for romance, nothing more.

I don't have time to make chapters that's why it takes months before updating a novel.

Also...

Ugh, I should probably make a barrier on my novel before writing out of control. I mean focusing on one genre. This novel is a mixed genre, there will be a chapter focusing on action more, the drama more, comedy, and even Romance.

Spoiler: In the future, the world will change much more futuristic than ours.

Because I want the technology development here are constantly moving, meaning it can be a deterrent to many characters.

Anyway, this is my thoughts and plans explanation so, I guess thank you for reading? Hahaha

(oh, authors always want their readers supports them because it gives us the energy to write and avoid being lazy. There is also a time when readers are being an A-hole and that's the only reason why authors suddenly dropped their novel despite having good supporters.

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Secret fact, I am writing this novel not really for you guys, It's for me hahaha. I want to write a novel that I will enjoy through my lifetime, it sounds stupid but, I want to focus here. I might write other novels but it'll be shorter than this. And also I thought why not share the stories that I wanted to write for myself and with the help of you guys, It'll make it even better. I'm just like you guys, I'm also a reader of this story. That's why you are free to suggest an idea of what will make a better story.

as an author, I still had the authority on what I want on the story. But it doesn't mean that I will ignore your suggestion, I will always read it and think it over if it'll fit in the storyline.

Anyway, this just keeps getting longer and longer, Thank you, everyone, on trying hard on reading this! Joke aside, I honestly thank you. There will be a second thought and so on in the future.

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