Transformers In Marvel

Let me talk about the update first. During this period of time, many people have asked me why there is one update. In fact, these are two chapters in one. Each chapter has 4,000 words, which is actually the same as the previous two updates and 4,000 words. I will not play tricks on the threshold of 4,000 words, because there are not enough 4,000 words, and there will be no full attendance of 600 yuan this month. I might as well ask for leave on the same day. With my existing author points, I can ask for two days off every month. If I exceed two days, the perfect attendance award will fly~

As for the plot, the book has now reached 1.9 million words. Originally, I estimated that it would be good to write 2 million words, but unexpectedly, 2 million words is not enough. I looked through the outline of the follow-up plot again, and there are still many things I haven't written. The protagonist is almost two million words, and he is only the eighth-level sole god. There is still a long way to go...

This is why I cut too many things in the first 1.9 million words.

Looking back carefully, among other things, I cut off a lot of things related to a single mutant. Some people say that mutants are too weak in battle, but anyone who reads comics knows that the X-Men are out, so is Avengers garbage? Tony's anti-phoenix armor has a record of blowing up a phoenix. Rune Thor and Broken Arm Thor hang all dissatisfied, not to mention Hulk, oba has come out, the strongest form Immortal Hulk has officially Log in to the comics (the plan can’t keep up with the changes, the four-handed Hulk set in this book is the strongest, and now it is overthrown, and the Immortal Hulk will be promoted), so the combat power system is really not a problem, but these things have been cut off by me.

There are also Transformers, more than one reader has said that my description of Transformers is too little, indeed, because I cut too many things. It's not that it can't be written, but if it is written, the content of this book will be too huge. This kind of super enrichment will probably kill many readers.

This also involves a rhythm problem. This book is a collection of Marvel DC, and there are a bunch of high-ranking bosses. How strong are these big guys? So strong that the multiverse-level infinite gem Thanos has become a small character not worth mentioning. Many people are talking about the power of Thanos in the movie, hanging xxx. In fact, readers who are familiar with comics know that Thanos with Infinity Stones is the bottom brother even in the Marvel comics universe. If you count DC ( DC has opened up a corner of the Almighty Universe, and quietly revealed that the world inside the wall of origin is just an ant in the vast nothingness, and there are countless multiverses outside the wall. And there is no movement on the Marvel side , the perspective still stays at the xth world. I forgot the exact number of worlds. Anyway, there are still several multiverses that are comparable to or even stronger than the multiverse where the Avengers and X-Men are located. I just don’t know when Marvel will Only then can the content of the omnipotent universe be drawn).

It takes up a lot of space to explain these complex world views and combat power systems, as well as those gods that many readers who do not read comics have never heard of. Crazy expansion like a snowball, this kind of slow and polyrhythmic sense makes me worry that many readers will be lost.

The problem of rhythm is the core problem of web articles, and some readers say that the rhythm of my writing is too fast in some places.

Big incidents erupted one after another, and it made his head hurt... I can only smile bitterly, I don't have the ability of a great god to move clouds and water, so I can only choose the lesser of the two. Maybe sometimes I did "did" a little bit, but it was better than "" "Water" is much better, right? Even if sometimes a lot of readers die due to drought, at least the content is real, without a lot of parallel imports to buffer real time.

It's essentially a problem, rhythm. In order to keep the rhythm as much as possible (this book does have rhythm problems in some places, but I can only say that I have tried my best), I have cut too many things on the outline, and I have to Otherwise, even if the total number of words is less than three million, two hundred and sixty-seven is still more than enough at the current stage of writing. Then when the book is finished, it is estimated to be... four million words? No matter how bad it is, there must be 3.5 million.

There is also the heroine Wanda. I am not good at writing emotional dramas, so sometimes I deliberately reduce the portrayal of the relationship between the hero and the heroine. The disadvantage is that some readers will feel that something is missing, but again, the poisonous points written in the emotions can be called dramas. Poison, I can feed you this kind of emotional poison as little as possible by doing this. If you are poisoned to death, who will read my book? Right? It's better to choose the lesser of two phases, and cut off some emotional scenes.

Unknowingly wrote so much, it can be regarded as a phased summary, and then, um, I found that I only have one chapter saved, so I can only update hiahiahia later today~~~