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Readers who were not optimistic about this book at the beginning basically gave up reading it. After all, tens of thousands of words have been updated, and those who stay are also follow-up readers who seriously discuss the plot.

"So it's a battle of wits again, Ishigami vs. Yukawa."

"This plot is too plain. If you make a bold prediction, the ending will definitely be Yu Chuan finding out the truth, Ishigami gg."

"After all, justice must prevail, otherwise you will not pass the trial (laughing)"

"But why did the protagonist help Jingzi hide the killing process? Wouldn't he be an accomplice?"

"The one above is because of love! Didn't the text explain that Shishen likes Yasuko, and if he likes her, then help her commit crime 2333."

"One thing to say, the protagonist's behavior is really a bit inexplicable. This is breaking the law, so it can't be regarded as an act of righteousness, right?"

"It's a fart to be brave when he sees righteousness. He is doing it for his own self-interest."

"Is that love? It's clearly a greedy person's body!"

"Stop talking, it's all the ex-husband's fault."

"Speaking of which, why did Shishen destroy half of the body and leave fingerprints? Isn't this to release water for the police?"

"That's right, isn't the author's setting rigorous? A genius mathematician with a 10% off water bottle? The identity of the deceased was found out after the body was destroyed? I'm so drunk."

"Nonsense, you can do whatever you want in front of the police in one day? Be more rigorous!"

"Hey, I don't want to brag about it, I can only say that vampires are really almost meaningless when they write suspense."

"The writing and plot are good, but compared to the house of horrors, it's still almost meaningless."

"Ghost University's update is really top-notch, with 20,000 words per day, it's definitely a model worker in the industry."

Su Chen glanced at the book review section.

Sure enough, book lovers are still very picky.

The bland plot in the first half makes it impossible to see anything at all. Even old reasoning fans think Su Chen's writing is mediocre.

The wind reviews on the Internet are not good for the tone of the book.

Everyone thinks that the god-like author vampire, this time it is true that the status of his work has declined, and he is about to fall from the throne of God.

The writing is cold, the plot is mediocre, and the entire book has tens of thousands of words, so it can be said that there are no bright spots, and even the results of the recommendation position are not very satisfactory.

Although the book "The Devotion of Suspect X" is currently ranked first in the same period, it is mostly due to the effect of the great god.

Everyone is willing to vote for the face of Doupo or House of Horrors, to have a look and to support it.

When it is on the shelves, it is estimated that few people are willing to spend money.

But Su Chen didn't plan to put it on the shelves either.

But he hasn't told anyone about this news yet, because he knows that even if he tells the editor, the other party will not agree. Platinum only writes 150,000 words in a book, and Leng Feng probably has to educate himself on the spot. .

Therefore, for the sake of unnecessary trouble, wait until Sunday, when all the updates that should be updated are completed, and I directly apply for a wave of completion in the background.

The old plan worked.

It can be said that Su Chen had experience in this kind of thing when he finished the "Death note" last time.

On the other hand, when "The Devotion of Suspect X" is written to the end a few days later, if the editor has read this chapter, he probably really has nothing to say.

If such an ending can still be criticized, then Su Chen can only say, I give you the pen, you write it, come on, you will be the next Keigo Higashino, the next suspense writer.

Sansan's residence in a high-end park in Shanghai.

Sansan was holding her mobile phone, seriously flipping through the vampire's "The Devotion of Suspect X", and read the tens of thousands of words of the text with a complicated expression.

Looking back at those years, when the platinum writer Sansan was still young, before he achieved today's achievements, he was also young and energetic, and wanted to try all themes, including this suspenseful reasoning type of high-force novels.

At that time, the web literature was still barren, and he mostly relied on the income from traditional Chinese publications to earn his manuscript fees.

That's right, counting down the years, Sansan can be regarded as a hardcore Internet writer.

Although I wrote a suspense novel mainly about bizarre murders with my passion at that time, I still couldn’t add complicated and interlocking plots in the end. I racked my brains thinking about the outline every day, and finally the grades fluttered and the book was cut. .

And this "Dedication of Suspect X", although the previous plots are good, but overall it is too bland.

At least in terms of the conception of the case, it can only be said to be not bad, definitely not ingenious.

In the beginning, revealing the murderer, and then letting the two protagonists fight each other out of wits, this is not a traditional way of writing, and it is very risky to find another way.

In this book of vampires, he even saw his once dashing figure.

This is not good.

As a close friend, he felt that it was necessary for him to remind the other party that he should determine a fixed writing style as soon as possible, instead of being a neurological pen that can write on any subject.

These days, you writers can write about everything, but readers don’t read everything. Even Sansan’s old platinum brand, if you really want to publish a female channel, then readers will definitely lose Huge portion.

So, Sansan opened QQ, and was about to talk to Su Chen, but found that in the group chat of the Troubleshooting Brigade, several people were already discussing this book.

"What's the matter with your new book, vampire?"

As Su Chen's regular reader, Mr. Dan jumped out to express his doubts.

Mingyou: "Isn't it too different from your previous style?"

"Yeah, I was shocked when I first saw it." Bai Yu also effervescently said.

Su Chen: "What's wrong?"

"It doesn't look interesting."

The loyal words were harsh, and Mr. Dan said it directly without much hesitation.

"Your novel will definitely lose weight if it goes on like this, compared to your House of Horror and Dou Po, your grades are too poor.

I also read the current text, there is nothing wrong with it, it is like a piece of steamed corn bread when I chew it, it is dry and hard, not even a drop of water. "

"Tsk, Boss Dan is beeping old water."

Sansan couldn't help but start sending messages.

"I think it's all right. There's nothing wrong with writing this book, but you haven't been in the pit for a long time, a vampire. As someone who has experienced it, I still want to remind you to confirm that your writing style is subtle as soon as possible. Judging from this new book , you should also know what the readers want to see, right?"

Sansan and Mr. Dan tried to persuade him.

It almost made Su Chen cry.

The words are not harsh, and he is not glass-hearted. He can still accept a certain degree of persuasion.

But one thing that will not change is that this book will not cut anything because of this.

Even if the grades are not good, he wants to let this "Suspect X's Devotion" enter the hall of gods in another world.

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