Summary
The Perfect Specimen,
Author's note:
It's my first novel and I am writing here to just get some feedback. Please don't hold back and give me everything you got. I'll take mindless rants and very constructive good criticism. I just appreciate the fact that you took the time to read and review if you did!
Further update. This novel is now on pause. I have been taking everything in from the experience of writing this novel, both positive and negative feedback. I will revisit this novel in the future after I get a more concise picture of what direction to take it in. In the meantime, I am going to be writing another novel on my own time and after I finish it, I will begin the daily upload process. After I finish, I will come back and revise this story on my own time and re-post it after fixing everything I want to fix.
Thank you all so much for reading, I will be back with this and more stories in the future. Until then, be on the lookout for me!
- 1 Chapter 1 - Awakened
- 2 Chapter 2 - Monster?
- 3 Chapter 3 - The N.a.k.e.d Boy!
- 4 Chapter 4 - Like Family
- 5 Chapter 5 - The Answer To His Prayers
- 6 Chapter 6 - May Not Be So Bad
- 7 Chapter 7 - Little Brother
- 8 Chapter 8 - You're Not Needed
- 9 Chapter 9 - Oh! Uh....yum?
- 10 Chapter 10 - Are You Ready To Go?
- 11 Chapter 11 - Think Of Us As Family
- 12 Chapter 12 - The Assessment
- 13 Chapter 13 - A Monumental Problem
- 14 Chapter 14 - I Can't Eat This
- 15 Chapter 15 - The Rough Special
- 16 Chapter 16 - I Will Want Something In Return
- 17 Chapter 17 - You Already Did!
- 18 Chapter 18 - Don't Worry! I'm A Fast Learner
- 19 Chapter 19 - Newfound Morals
- 20 Chapter 20 - Oh Yeah! I Can Still Do That!
- 21 Chapter 21 - You're Not That Special Then?
- 22 Chapter 22 - I'm Just An Opportunist
- 23 Chapter 23 - I'll Take Those!
- 24 Chapter 24 - Associate With The Weak
- 25 Chapter 25 - Stuck In A Loop
- 26 Chapter 26 - Maybe I Can Eat This?
- 27 Chapter 27 - If You Don't Believe Me, Then Just Look!
- 28 Chapter 28 - 3...2...1... Fight!
- 29 Chapter 29 - Winner!
- 30 Chapter 30 - Well, You're Surprisingly Sturdy
- 31 Chapter 31 - Was This Planned?
- 32 Chapter 32 - Rise To The Top
- 33 Chapter 33 - That's Not Fair...
- 34 Chapter 34 - You're Dead Meat!
- 35 Chapter 35 - I Haven't Given Up On You
- 36 Chapter 36 - I Did It!
- 37 Chapter 37 - Warning Of Death
- 38 Chapter 38 - Monster Style
- 39 Chapter 39 - I Wasn't The Only One
- 40 Chapter 40 - Waste Removal
- 41 Chapter 41 - Interlude: Is It Wrong?
- 42 Chapter 42 - Scralebits
- 43 Chapter 43 - Are We The Monsters?
- 44 Chapter 44 - Hey Brother
- 45 Chapter 45 - Just A Myth
- 46 Chapter 46 - Ascension Process
- 47 Chapter 47 - Ascension Process (2)
- 48 Chapter 48 - You Will Pay For This Humiliation
- 49 Chapter 49 - Revenge
- 50 Chapter 50 - Sewer Rats
- 51 Chapter 51 - That's Inconvenient
- 52 Chapter 52 - Hungry!
- 53 Chapter 53 - Adventures of Clem
- 54 Chapter 54 - Ask The Real Questions
- 55 Chapter 55 - I Think You Dropped This
- 56 Chapter 56 - Wato Yammi
- 57 Chapter 57 - No Time Like The Present!
- 58 Chapter 58 - Echo-Eater
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